Help with description [POLL]

I need a little help with the description for my story that will be out in a few days. What do you think about this one? The story is a Christmas romance story.

EDIT: The story is now OUT: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6326054540214272

A dreamy trip to Paris for the holidays seems like the perfect getaway, except for a small detail. Or two, if you count the southern boy you can’t seem to stay away from.

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Quick summary of what the story is about:

A girl wins a trip to Paris, just in time for Christmas. Little does she knows that it isn’t what she had in mind. To top it all, the first encounter she has in this city is with a boy, who makes a bad first impression on her, but someone who, she’ll slowly catch feelings for.

Any suggestion is very welcome :two_hearts:

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Amazingggg! Please continue the story!!! I would love to read it when its out! :pleading_face: :blob_hearts:

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Thank you! It will be out on Nov 25 (two days!!) :heart_eyes_cat: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Yay! I’m definitely going to read it :blue_heart:

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I love it could u let me know when it’s out?

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Thank you! :pleading_face: :two_hearts:

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I will! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Good luck with publishing :blob_hearts: What’s your episode name? :blob_hearts:

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Thank you! My author name is Emma.stories, but I’m not sure it will show up on the app :confused: Tell me if you can find me :two_hearts:

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Whats ur description in ur caption cause I found a few :blob_hearts:

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This is my profile :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
The story I’m talking about here isn’t out yet though, it will be in two days :two_hearts:

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Sounds lovely!

Maybe change the words “a small detail” to “one small detail.” I think it sounds better that way (especially since you say “two” after it).

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I just changed it! Thanks for the advice :two_hearts:

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Girl, let me know when you publish because this story sounds epic :pray: :blob_hearts:

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Thank you :pleading_face: I will!

I lovvve the description :heart_eyes: but i wouldn’t read the story NOT BECAUSE it’s plot doesn’t sound good BUT BECAUSE im not fond of christmas stories or movies or anything :tired_face:
Again, love the description tho :heart_eyes::heart_eyes:

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