Help with feedback

Hey can some one read my story on episode, and tell me what you think?
It’s called The Vamp Girl… This is my 1st story and I am trying to make it look good and be a good story as well… Thanks

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Moved to Share Feedback since you want reviews. :wink:

Do you have the link to it? Couldn’t find it with only the name :confused: hey is the link… thank you… Sydney how do I move it to share feedback? Do I movie my story… sorry new to this lol


That’s what my cover looks like…

Feedback would be lovely good and bad feedback is welcomed