I have seen many people tell me that my scenes change without really having an “ending”. So I was wondering if anyone wanted to help me fill in scenes and just make my story a much more enjoyable experience for the reader. I am new to writing so it needs to be someone with experience on writing and also maybe coding. I can code fine on my own but someone who knows what to add and knows how to direct me in doing so through code.
If you are interested in helping then reply to this so it is easier to keep track of. Or even reply with pointers on how to make scenes less jumpy.
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I can help you but am not an expert at coding.
That is ok. If you can just help me on what I should fill in that would be great.
You can pm me on how I should fill in certain scenes or transition to the next scene, if you ok with reading it through.
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You could try adding a few transactions in-between the scenes, fade in and fade out normally do the trick, even if its only for .5 of a second.
One point where I though it was very jumpy was in episode one. The main character is talking to her friend about when she got the call about the opportunity. The friend said “speaking of exploring other options” and then it jumped to her sitting in a waiting room (i think that’s what it was) Sorry for my terrible memory, I’m on the verge of passing out 
Love the story so far though! added it to my favourites… kinda wanting more episodes to binge 
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Same, it is so late where I am. But I am doing a R4R with someone so I am trying to finish them so nobody thinks I am ghosting them. 
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Hi! I’m pretty experienced with writing and coding, I think I can help!