Help with grammar?

is my summary sentence grammatically correct?
it’s late and i’m not so sure ashjdfg

Teenage artist Callie unexpectedly finds herself at the centre of a conspiracy when she receives news that will drastically changer her life.

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the only problem is a spelling error with “change”
oh and change “centre” to “center”

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oh thanks i hadn’t noticed the changer!
but centre is british :stuck_out_tongue:

centre is correct. the sentence just seems fine. if you want it a touch more organized, I’d recommend restructuring to When Callie, a teenage artist, receives news …, she unexpectedly …

they both work tho

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