Help with makeing it sound better

[line123462]

I have this choice but her answers can I get some help to make them sound better in explanation because I dont really like how it is said. and yes they are not grammar check.

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JANE
After multiple school shootings people want something done

    JANE
But many people are against it because they dont want there guns taken

    JANE
But they forgot that we arent talking about taken them.
But about better background checks so it wont end in dangerous hands

    JANE
There is also the argument taken the guns wont even stop the vilonce
Even though that worked all other countries

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“planned parenthood” {
JANE (talk_neutral)
I think that is planned parenthood

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NADIM (talk_doubtful)
And what is your opinion on the subject?

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    JANE
    Well its sad that we abort babies
    
    JANE
    But there are already millions of oprhanges and I dont feel like we need to add more
    
    JANE
    Also its not like people get an abortion for now reason
    
    JANE
    Some are in danger because there body cant handle it. and some might have been raped 
    
    JANE
    And then there is the fackt its more about controling woman than protecting a fetus

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“climate change” {
JANE (talk_neutral)
I think that is climate change

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And what is your opinion on the subject?

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JANE
A lot of people deny the climate change

JANE
Espically people in power. because they rather earn money

JANE
But its ruing or planet,

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“immigration” {
JANE (talk_neutral)
I think that is immigration

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And what is your opinion on the subject?

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JANE
I understand people dont want bad peolple into the country
But of them arent. they are people seeking a better life

JANE
And we are a country made up of imigrants can we really deny them here.

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NADIM (talk_neutral)
Good explanation
NADIM (talk_agree_happy)
Are there any here who disagree with [JANE]

[Summi]

JANE
But many people are against it because they don’t want their guns to be taken away.

JANE

But they forgot that we are not talking about taking the guns away.
But what about background chekings? So the guns won’t end up in the wrong hands.

JANE

They are even arguing about the fact that taking the guns away won’t solve anything.
Even though it worked in other countries.

[Summi]

 JANE
    Well, aborting the babies is sad.
    
    JANE
But there's already millions of orpans and I don't think we need more.
    
    JANE
    Also every person has a reason for an aborton.
    
    JANE
For some it's health issues and for others it might have been the result of rape.
    
    JANE
    And then there is the fackt its more about controling woman than protecting a fetus
I CAN NOT UNDERSTAND WHAT DO YOU WANT TO SAY WITH THIS SENTENCE.

[Summi]

JANE
There are a lot of people denying the climate changes

JANE
Espically people who have power because they prefer to earn money instead of saving the Earth.

JANE
But it is ruing our planet

JANE
I understand people who don’t want any bad people migrating into their countries.
But lot of them are not bad, they are just seeking for a better life.

JANE
Our entire country is made out of imigrants, we really can not deny their existance.

[line123462]

thank you. this helped a lot