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 JANE
    Well, aborting the babies is sad.
    
    JANE
But there's already millions of orpans and I don't think we need more.
    
    JANE
    Also every person has a reason for an aborton.
    
    JANE
For some it's health issues and for others it might have been the result of rape.
    
    JANE
    And then there is the fackt its more about controling woman than protecting a fetus
I CAN NOT UNDERSTAND WHAT DO YOU WANT TO SAY WITH THIS SENTENCE.
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