Help with my script por favor

INT. BAKERY - DAY with COUNTER BAKERY
readerMessage Two hours later.
@cut to zone 1
@overlay COUNTER BAKERY shifts to 0 0 in zone 1
@overlay COUNTER BAKERY scales to 1.000 1.000
@overlay COUNTER BAKERY moves to layer 11
@CHAR 4 moves to layer 4
@CHAR 16 moves to layer 2
@CHAR 6 moves to layer 1
@CHAR 9 moves to layer 5
@LEXI moves to layer 2
@add Notepad White Lined to LEXI
@LEXI spot 1.280 311 7 in zone 1 and CHAR 9 spot 1.086 106 24 in zone 1 AND CHAR 6 spot 1.280 5 3 in zone 1 and CHAR 4 spot 1.243 151 24 in zone 1 and CHAR 16 spot 1.280 73 15 in zone 1 and LEXI faces left and CHAR 9 faces right and CHAR 6 faces right and CHAR 4 faces right and CHAR 16 faces right and CHAR 9 is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop and CHAR 9 is text_phone_neutral_loop and CHAR 6 is yawn_bored and CHAR 4 is talk_think_neutral and LEXI is write_takenotes_happy
LEXI (talk_shrug_concerned)
I’m sorry sir but the person in front of you bought the last chocolate covered donut.

@CHAR 9 is cry_sniff_sad_loop and CHAR 4 is talk_exhausted
EXT. KC CAFE - DAY with TABLE CAFE at layer 3 with KC CAFE TABLEBL at layer 3 with KC CAFE TABLEBLC at layer 1 with KC CAFE TABLEFR at layer 3 with KC CAFE TABLEFRC at layer 1 with KC CAFE DISPLAY at layer 3
@overlay 6161746219433984_KC CAFE DISPLAY shifts to -71 -26 in zone 1
@overlay 6161746219433984_KC CAFE DISPLAY scales to 3.009 3.009
@overlay 6161746219433984_KC CAFE DISPLAY moves to layer 3
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&cut to zone 1 and zoom reset and pause for 1 then pan to zone 3 in 7 then pause for 1 then cut to zone 1 and NEWS REPORTER starts sip_cup_happy and JASON starts eat_food_hand_neutral
&NEWS REPORTER spot 1.28 115 -75 in zone 1 and NEWS REPORTER faces right and NEWS REPORTER is talk_stemware_toast_happy and NEWS REPORTER moves to layer 2 and JASON spot 1.28 234 -60 in zone 1 and JASON faces left and JASON faces left and JASON is laugh_chuckle and JASON moves to layer 1 then NEWS REPORTER starts sip_cup_happy and CAF2 starts talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral
&CAF3 spot .436 250 448 in zone 1 and CAF3 is idle_sit_neutral_loop_rear and CAF3 faces left and CAF3 moves to layer -2 and CAF5 spot .374 3 470 in zone 2 and CAF5 faces left and CAF5 is talk_sit_reassure_happy and CAF5 moves to layer -4 and CAF4 spot .311 314 505 in zone 1 and CAF4 faces left and CAF4 is think_rubchin and CAF4 moves to layer -5 and CAF6 spot .520 119 410 in zone 2 and CAF6 faces right and CAF6 is talk_sit_shrug_neutral and CAF6 moves to layer -4 and CAF8 spot .520 212 401 in zone 2 and CAF8 faces right and CAF8 is idle_sit_anklescrossed_neutral_loop and CAF8 moves to layer -4 and CAF7 spot .592 187 369 in zone 2 and CAF7 is idle_sit_neutral_loop_rear and CAF7 faces left and CAF7 moves to layer -2 and LUKE spot .426 313 424 in zone 2 and LUKE faces left and LUKE is write_takenotes_neutral and LUKE moves to layer 2 and MAYA spot .466 129 420 in zone 3 and MAYA faces left and MAYA is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear and MAYA moves to layer -1 and CAF9 spot .522 68 385 in zone 3 and CAF9 faces left and CAF9 is rear and CAF9 moves to layer 2 and CAF10 spot .701 163 277 in zone 2 and CAF10 faces left and CAF10 moves to layer 0 then CAF10 walks to spot .701 -120 277 in zone 1 in 5
@add Coffee Cup To Go to NEWS REPORTER
@add Donut Chocolate to JASON
@add Notepad White Lined to LUKE
@MAYA walks to spot 1.165 174 135 in zone 1
@MAYA moves to layer -1
@pause for a beat
MAYA (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
How’s everything tasting?

Can someone help me and tell me what wrong with it I am having trouble with it

What exactly are you having trouble with

my character starts talking while the screen is panning

Are you talking about when it start over here

LEXI (talk_shrug_concerned)
I’m sorry sir but the person in front of you bought the last chocolate covered donut.

I don’t even see a panning command for it to pan

it starts panning while MAYA starts talking
MAYA (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
How’s

Sorry, that’s my mistake. Here’s what it should look like

If it still doesn’t work let me know, it’s something with my timings.

EXT. KC CAFE - DAY with TABLE CAFE at layer 3 with KC CAFE TABLEBL at layer 3 with KC CAFE TABLEBLC at layer 1 with KC CAFE TABLEFR at layer 3 with KC CAFE TABLEFRC at layer 1 with KC CAFE DISPLAY to 3.009 -71 -26 at layer 3
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&NEWS REPORTER spot 1.28 115 -75 in zone 1 and NEWS REPORTER faces right and NEWS REPORTER is talk_stemware_toast_happy and NEWS REPORTER moves to layer 2 and JASON spot 1.28 234 -60 in zone 1 and JASON faces left and JASON faces left and JASON is laugh_chuckle and JASON moves to layer 1 then NEWS REPORTER starts sip_cup_happy and CAF2 starts talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral
&CAF3 spot .436 250 448 in zone 1 and CAF3 is idle_sit_neutral_loop_rear and CAF3 faces left and CAF3 moves to layer -2 and CAF5 spot .374 3 470 in zone 2 and CAF5 faces left and CAF5 is talk_sit_reassure_happy and CAF5 moves to layer -4 and CAF4 spot .311 314 505 in zone 1 and CAF4 faces left and CAF4 is think_rubchin and CAF4 moves to layer -5 and CAF6 spot .520 119 410 in zone 2 and CAF6 faces right and CAF6 is talk_sit_shrug_neutral and CAF6 moves to layer -4 and CAF8 spot .520 212 401 in zone 2 and CAF8 faces right and CAF8 is idle_sit_anklescrossed_neutral_loop and CAF8 moves to layer -4 and CAF7 spot .592 187 369 in zone 2 and CAF7 is idle_sit_neutral_loop_rear and CAF7 faces left and CAF7 moves to layer -2 and LUKE spot .426 313 424 in zone 2 and LUKE faces left and LUKE is write_takenotes_neutral and LUKE moves to layer 2 and MAYA spot .466 129 420 in zone 3 and MAYA faces left and MAYA is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear and MAYA moves to layer -1 and CAF9 spot .522 68 385 in zone 3 and CAF9 faces left and CAF9 is rear and CAF9 moves to layer 2 and CAF10 spot .701 163 277 in zone 2 and CAF10 faces left and CAF10 moves to layer 0 then CAF10 walks to spot .701 -120 277 in zone 1 in 5
@cut to zone 1 and zoom reset and pause for 1 then pan to zone 3 in 7 then pause for 1 then cut to zone 1 and NEWS REPORTER starts sip_cup_happy and JASON starts eat_food_hand_neutral
@add Coffee Cup To Go to NEWS REPORTER
@add Donut Chocolate to JASON
@add Notepad White Lined to LUKE
@MAYA walks to spot 1.165 174 135 in zone 1
@MAYA moves to layer -1
@pause for a beat
MAYA (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
How’s everything tasting?
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