Help with my story please?

Hey guys. So I just published my story and I was looking for some feedback? Thanks you!

Here’s my story:

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There were only a few grammar mistakes and one layer error that I found. Also at the beginning when the mc is talking to her parents their mouths don’t move. I liked the story line though.

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Thank you so much for the feedback!!

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