Help With Script Error

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The error:

My script:

INT. KATRINE BED - DAY

readerMessage Background credit for the bedroom: @katrine.stories

@LORETTA stands screen center in zone 2 AND LORETTA faces left AND LORETTA starts idle

@cut to zone 2

#Loretta Workout Outfit - Female {

label workout_outfit

    NARRATOR (LORETTA)

Which workout outfit should I wear to take my morning run?

choice
“Blue and White Workout” {

sound change_clothes

&LORETTA starts dustoff_loop

&LORETTA changes into Blue and White Workout
}

@LORETTA is think

    NARRATOR (LORETTA)

Is this what I want to wear?

“Yes, it’s much better!”{
goto outfit_end
}
“No, I want to see the other option.”{
goto workout_outfit
}

“All Red Workout” {

sound change_clothes

&LORETTA starts dustoff_loop

&LORETTA changes into All Red Workout
}

@LORETTA is think

    NARRATOR (LORETTA)

Is this what I want to wear?

“Yes, it’s much better!”{
goto outfit_end
}
“No, I want to see the other option.”{
goto workout_outfit
}

“Black and White Workout”{

sound change_clothes

&LORETTA starts dustoff_loop

&LORETTA changes into Black and White Workout
}

@LORETTA is think

    NARRATOR (LORETTA)

Is this what I want to wear?

“Yes, it’s much better!”{
goto outfit_end
}
“No, I want to see the other option.”{
goto workout_outfit
}

“Pink and Black Workout”{

sound change_clothes

@LORETTA starts dustoff_loop

@LORETTA changes into Pink and Black Workout
}

@LORETTA is think

    NARRATOR (LORETTA)

Is this what I want to wear?

“Yes, it’s much better!”{
goto outfit_end
}
“No, I want to see the other option.”{
goto workout_outfit
}

“Orange and White Workout”{

sound change_clothes

&LORETTA starts dustoff_loop

&LORETTA changes into Orange and White Workout
}

@LORETTA is think

    NARRATOR (LORETTA)

Is this what I want to wear?

“Yes, it’s much better!”{
goto outfit_end
}
“No, I want to see the other option.”{
goto workout_outfit
}

label outfit_end

    NARRATOR (LORETTA)
Is this my final choice? 

choice
“Yes, it’s much better!”{
goto outfit_end
}
“No, I want to see the other option.”{
goto workout_outfit
}

#}

Could it be because you have PREMIUM on line 31 but you don’t have the word “choice”?

choice < PREMIUM >

I’m not too sure but I’m going to try it.

Good luck

Okay, I didn’t realized the last one had choice so I fixed that but another problem came along which is this…

Exactly what it says; you need to have a character/narrator speak before another choice.

i.e:
LORETTA (talk_animation)
I’ll see the other option

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I think it’s because you have a choice immediately following another choice. Add a line of dialogue in between then and see if that works

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Your putting the word “choice” in every choice you have to do something like this

NARR
Dialog

choice
“Choice 1”{

}“Choice 2”{

}“Choice 3”{

}

And so on

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Thanks to you both for your help!

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