Help with story description making it shorter

Short #1: “You’re just a regular girl until a chance encounter with a hot, famous and egotistical billionaire turns into an engagement.”

#1: “You’re just a regular girl until a chance encounter with a hot, famous and egotistical billionaire turns into an engagement which is more than you bargained for.”

Short #2: “You’re just a regular girl until a chance encounter with a hot, famous and egotistical billionaire turns you into his fiancée.”

#2: “You’re just a regular girl until a chance encounter with a hot, famous and egotistical billionaire turns you into his fiancée - which is more than you bargained for.”

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