Help with story description, please!

Does anyone have advice on how I can make this better? Thanks in advance!

He’s a bounty hunter. She was his target. When they team up to take down the city’s tyrants, will they be able to take down the walls between them? Or will their past destroy them?

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Honestly I think it’s a great description, considering I know nothing about it- the story seems super interesting. I would totally read something like this. Idk much about the story to make a better description than this :sweat_smile:

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Haha yeah that’s fair. Thank you! I love your profile photo btw : )

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Tysm! :sparkling_heart: :heart_hands:

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