Help writing a scene

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I want to make one of my characters (Naila) end up sleeping over at someone’s house after an accident (car crash). How would I type up that script if she just wanted to leave??? I can give credit :slight_smile: also if you need more info just tell me what you need.

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The background is INT. LUXURY PENTHOUSE BEDROOM - DAY

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Are you asking coding or how to write up her POV?

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Do you have your narraration because for me that make it much easier, like I use Wattpad to type it up then paste then I know exactly what I want to have happen

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You have to use “gain” and the “if /elif/ else” code in your script
You can write like this:
(just an example)—

choice
“I want to stay at my friend’s house”{
NAILA (talk_neutral)
I want to stay at your place tonight.
gain Night_withfriend
} “I want to leave”{
NAILA (talk_exhausted)
I think I’ll just go home now.
}

if (Night_withfriend) {
INT. LUXURY PENTHOUSE BEDROOM - DAY
(then continue the scene at friend’s house)
} else {
(continue the scene where NAILA stays at home)

If you have any questions in coding this , feel free to pm me :blush:
I can help you code that whole part…
Hope this helps you! :blush: :heart:

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being hones I dont understad the question…do you need help with how to spotdirect her and walk her from the bed away or more how to write her POV when she wakes up in place she doesnt know?

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Spot direct

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I wrote it for limelight:

INT. LUXURY PENTHOUSE BEDROOM - DAY with INT. LUXURY PENTHOUSE BEDROOM - DAY at layer 0
&NAILA spot 0.515 68 369 in zone 3
&NAILA is sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop
&NAILA faces right
&cut to zone 3
@pause for 2
&NAILA faces left
@NAILA is idle_lay_awake_rubeyes_loop
@pause for 1
@NAILA is idle_lay_awake_neutral_loop
&NAILA spot 0.704 129 246 in zone 3
@NAILA is idle_sit_serious_loop
&NAILA spot 0.704 126 218 in zone 3
@NAILA is transition_sit_to_stand
@NAILA is search_neutral
@pause for 1
&pan to zone 1 in 7
@NAILA walks to spot 1.054 -126 85 in zone 1 in 9 AND NAILA does it while walk_worried_loop

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Thanks! This is perfect!

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