Here is a preview


#1


Here is the preview of my story.
Give me feedback and honest opinion


#2

To me, it looks slowed down & that makes it look glitchy. Maybe increasing the duration


#3

Okay


#4

Oh, & try different music with it


#5

I, know there was so much sound during it, I just had to ask some new music, but it sucks right


#6

No It doesn’t. It just needs a little tinkering here & there


#7

Thanks should use my laptop for when I upload it.


#8

It really doesn’t matter


#9

Moved to Share Feedback since Community is for discussion of specific stories. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to PM me if there are any questions. :wink: