Here is something wrong


#1

the character jade i did create without bruises. Normally he fights and talks without bruises, en than at the end of the scene when he falls he changes into a head with bruises. But when i look at it he has his bruises from the beginnening. What’s wrong?

script;

EXT. BUS STOP EVENING - NIGHT with effect LIGHT RAIN

@cut to zone 2
&ANNEKE spot 1.052 91 139 AND ANNEKE faces right
&JAY spot 1.064 226 133
@ERIK enters from right to spot 1.280 315 8 THEN ERIK faces right and ERIK is idle_rear

    JAY (talk_flex)
I would love to give you a ride and much, much more.

@JAY is laugh_giggle

    ANNEKE (talk_angry_defensive)
Go away. I'm not in the mood for games.

@JAY walks to spot 1.064 146 125

@ANNEKE walks to spot 1.052 37 133 in 2 AND ANNEKE faces right

    JAY (talk_happy_hand_raised)
Oh but this is not a game, this is real.

    JAY (talk_neutral_arms_crossed)
I'll take you with me and we are going to my place to have a little fun.

@ERIK walks to spot 1.082 274 116 AND ERIK does it while walk_neutral THEN ERIK faces left AND ERIK is shiftweight

    ANNEKE (talk_afraid)
Oh no no no no no!

    ERIK (talk_doubtful)
Is there a problem here???

@ANNEKE is cry_sniff_loop

@JAY faces right

    JAY (talk_angry)
Would you mind your own business, boy?

    ERIK (talk_angry)
I wasn't talking to you.

    JAY (talk_angry_accuse)
Leave us alone and go somewhere else.

    ERIK (talk_idle_punch)
Do you need my to make your face red?
    JAY (talk_idle_punch)
From who? You, kiddo? Don't make me laugh!

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive

@JAY is punch_jab AND ERIK is dodge_rear AND ERIK faces right

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive AND ERIK faces left

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive AND ERIK faces left

@JAY is punch_jab AND ERIK is dodge_rear AND ERIK faces right

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive AND ERIK faces left

@JAY is run_fall

@JAY is idle_fallen

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black 2

EXT. BUS STOP EVENING - NIGHT with effect LIGHT RAIN

@JAY changes face into Cade Bruised


#2

@JAY changes face into Cade

EXT. BUS STOP EVENING - NIGHT with effect LIGHT RAIN

@cut to zone 2
&ANNEKE spot 1.052 91 139 AND ANNEKE faces right
&JAY spot 1.064 226 133
@ERIK enters from right to spot 1.280 315 8 THEN ERIK faces right and ERIK is idle_rear

JAY (talk_flex)

I would love to give you a ride and much, much more.
@JAY is laugh_giggle

ANNEKE (talk_angry_defensive)

Go away. I’m not in the mood for games.
@JAY walks to spot 1.064 146 125

@ANNEKE walks to spot 1.052 37 133 in 2 AND ANNEKE faces right

JAY (talk_happy_hand_raised)

Oh but this is not a game, this is real.

JAY (talk_neutral_arms_crossed)

I’ll take you with me and we are going to my place to have a little fun.
@ERIK walks to spot 1.082 274 116 AND ERIK does it while walk_neutral THEN ERIK faces left AND ERIK is shiftweight

ANNEKE (talk_afraid)

Oh no no no no no!

ERIK (talk_doubtful)

Is there a problem here???
@ANNEKE is cry_sniff_loop

@JAY faces right

JAY (talk_angry)

Would you mind your own business, boy?

ERIK (talk_angry)

I wasn’t talking to you.

JAY (talk_angry_accuse)

Leave us alone and go somewhere else.

ERIK (talk_idle_punch)

Do you need my to make your face red?
JAY (talk_idle_punch)
From who? You, kiddo? Don’t make me laugh!
@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive

@JAY is punch_jab AND ERIK is dodge_rear AND ERIK faces right

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive AND ERIK faces left

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive AND ERIK faces left

@JAY is punch_jab AND ERIK is dodge_rear AND ERIK faces right

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive AND ERIK faces left

@JAY is run_fall

@JAY is idle_fallen

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black 2

EXT. BUS STOP EVENING - NIGHT with effect LIGHT RAIN

@JAY changes face into Cade Bruised


#3

I put it in the top so you can see it put if you post the story the viewers will see the normal faces until that scene happens


#4

But then he has his face from the beginning he has to end with it lol


#5

Yes it works, ho is that possible… the first time i used it it worked and then i thought i am going to cut this in this episode so there is a cliffhanger, i posted this in the new episode and it didn’t work anymore.
You are a genius. thanks you xxx


#6

I have another problem with that scene when he falls he falls like this:

And when I zoom in on his face he is in another direction:

I don’t know why…

script:

@JAY changes face into Cade
EXT. BUS STOP EVENING - NIGHT with effect LIGHT RAIN

@cut to zone 2
&ANNEKE spot 1.052 91 139 AND ANNEKE faces right
&JAY spot 1.064 226 133
@ERIK enters from right to spot 1.280 315 8 THEN ERIK faces right and ERIK is idle_rear

    JAY (talk_flex)
I would love to give you a ride and much, much more.

@JAY is laugh_giggle

    ANNEKE (talk_angry_defensive)
Go away. I'm not in the mood for games.

@JAY walks to spot 1.064 146 125

@ANNEKE walks to spot 1.052 37 133 in 2 AND ANNEKE faces right

    JAY (talk_happy_hand_raised)
Oh but this is not a game, this is real.

    JAY (talk_neutral_arms_crossed)
I'll take you with me and we are going to my place to have a little fun.

@ERIK walks to spot 1.082 274 116 AND ERIK does it while walk_neutral THEN ERIK faces left AND ERIK is shiftweight

    ANNEKE (talk_afraid)
Oh no no no no no!

    ERIK (talk_doubtful)
Is there a problem here???

@ANNEKE is cry_sniff_loop

@JAY faces right

    JAY (talk_angry)
Would you mind your own business, boy?

    ERIK (talk_angry)
I wasn't talking to you.

    JAY (talk_angry_accuse)
Leave us alone and go somewhere else.

    ERIK (talk_idle_punch)
Do you need my to make your face red?

JAY (talk_idle_punch)
From who? You, kiddo? Don't make me laugh!

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive

@JAY is punch_jab AND ERIK is dodge_rear AND ERIK faces right

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive AND ERIK faces left

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive AND ERIK faces left

@JAY is punch_jab AND ERIK is dodge_rear AND ERIK faces right

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive AND ERIK faces left

@JAY is run_fall

@JAY is idle_fallen

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black 2

EXT. BUS STOP EVENING - NIGHT with effect LIGHT RAIN

@JAY changes face into Cade Bruised

@cut to zone 2

&ANNEKE spot 1.280 96 -7 AND ANNEKE faces right
&ERIK spot 1.280 218 7 AND ERIK faces left

@zoom on 458 266 to 120% in 0

    ANNEKE (talk_scared_flashlight)
He's not dead is he?


    ERIK (talk_neutral)
No but, he has some bruises, he'll be fine.

    ANNEKE (talk_awkward)
Are you sure?

@JAY spot 1.280 386 111 in zone 3 AND JAY is idle_fallen AND JAY faces left
ERIK (talk_neutral_forward)
Yes, you don’t have to worry about him, he was going to rape you.

    ANNEKE (talk_neutral)
I know.

    ERIK (talk_neutral)
Come I'll walk you to your home...

    ANNEKE (talk_apathetic)
It is too far.

    ERIK (talk_neutral_forward)
Ok then we'll go with my car.

@pause for a beat
@cut to zone 3
@zoom on 751 0 to 215% in 1.3
@pause for 5
@zoom reset


#7

Where does he fall?


#8

Wait which way do you want him to be in??


#9

@JAY changes face into Cade
EXT. BUS STOP EVENING - NIGHT with effect LIGHT RAIN

@cut to zone 2
&ANNEKE spot 1.052 91 139 AND ANNEKE faces right
&JAY spot 1.064 226 133
@ERIK enters from right to spot 1.280 315 8 THEN ERIK faces right and ERIK is idle_rear

JAY (talk_flex)

I would love to give you a ride and much, much more.
@JAY is laugh_giggle

ANNEKE (talk_angry_defensive)

Go away. I’m not in the mood for games.
@JAY walks to spot 1.064 146 125

@ANNEKE walks to spot 1.052 37 133 in 2 AND ANNEKE faces right

JAY (talk_happy_hand_raised)

Oh but this is not a game, this is real.

JAY (talk_neutral_arms_crossed)

I’ll take you with me and we are going to my place to have a little fun.
@ERIK walks to spot 1.082 274 116 AND ERIK does it while walk_neutral THEN ERIK faces left AND ERIK is shiftweight

ANNEKE (talk_afraid)

Oh no no no no no!

ERIK (talk_doubtful)

Is there a problem here???
@ANNEKE is cry_sniff_loop

@JAY faces right

JAY (talk_angry)

Would you mind your own business, boy?

ERIK (talk_angry)

I wasn’t talking to you.

JAY (talk_angry_accuse)

Leave us alone and go somewhere else.

ERIK (talk_idle_punch)

Do you need my to make your face red?

JAY (talk_idle_punch)
From who? You, kiddo? Don’t make me laugh!
@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive

@JAY is punch_jab AND ERIK is dodge_rear AND ERIK faces right

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive AND ERIK faces left

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive AND ERIK faces left

@JAY is punch_jab AND ERIK is dodge_rear AND ERIK faces right

@ERIK is punch_jab AND JAY is punch_receive AND ERIK faces left

@JAY is run_fall

@JAY is idle_fallen

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black 2

EXT. BUS STOP EVENING - NIGHT with effect LIGHT RAIN

@JAY changes face into Cade Bruised AND JAY faces right

@cut to zone 2

&ANNEKE spot 1.280 96 -7 AND ANNEKE faces right
&ERIK spot 1.280 218 7 AND ERIK faces left

@zoom on 458 266 to 120% in 0

ANNEKE (talk_scared_flashlight)

He’s not dead is he?

ERIK (talk_neutral)

No but, he has some bruises, he’ll be fine.

ANNEKE (talk_awkward)

Are you sure?
@JAY spot 1.280 386 111 in zone 3 AND JAY is idle_fallen AND JAY faces left
ERIK (talk_neutral_forward)
Yes, you don’t have to worry about him, he was going to rape you.

ANNEKE (talk_neutral)

I know.

ERIK (talk_neutral)

Come I’ll walk you to your home…

ANNEKE (talk_apathetic)

It is too far.

ERIK (talk_neutral_forward)

Ok then we’ll go with my car.
@pause for a beat
@cut to zone 3
@zoom on 751 0 to 215% in 1.3
@pause for 5
@zoom reset


#10

like he falls, to the left but in the second part were anneke and erik are talking is a zooming to, that is not necessary normaly iff he falls left he should be still there in that scene but for the zooming they have gone to @cut to zone 3 it was someone who helped me do that scene.


#11

So you want him to face left :point_left:


#12

Not :point_right:


#13

nope with his face right like he was fallen.
and the zooming off the two is a little to much
and when the cut to zone 3 goes there is something wrong, it does not match.


#14

Let me test it out


#15

ok thank you xxx


#16

What do you mean by it is zoom to much like that characters are too big or what?


#17

Because there is no zoning in that part…


#18

Nvm I see it lol


#19

yes it does not match the first scene.


#20

Ohhh he was facing left when he fell