Here's my story. What do you think?


#21

just:
readerMessage “Your Text” :slight_smile:


#22

Ok, thanks :smile: And you’re alright with me using your responses for figuring out what needs to happen next?


#23

Sure :relaxed:


#24

Okay, AWESOME :blush: :heart:. A few questions: how do I make the reader able to make outfit choices? At the party: plan is that my MC, without actually wanting to, actually ends up scoring her crush and taking him/her to bed. How do you think my MC would respond when she wakes up the next day?
Should I describe my MC’s home after class? Besides, how can I improve the relationship between my MC and her crush?


#25

Hello everyone! :smile: *I’ve worked more on the story and would like to hear what you think! :blush: Here’s the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5551133424353280

I’d really appreciate feedback and advice! :heart_eyes: :grin:


#26

The story has been developed further http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5551133424353280


#27

Sorry, but for the last 26 days, nothing has really been developed any further.


#28

Hey guys. I’m back and I’ve added stuff to my story! :grin:


#29

HEY!! I’d love to do an R4R!:grin:

HERE’S THE INFO!!

Story Name: DEMIGODDESS

Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally. CC

Small Cover:
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Large Cover:
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LINK:


#30

Ok, sounds awesome. I’ll do it as soon as I get the app reinstalled.

gisellec

    July 4

***HEY!! I’d love to do an R4R!***:grin:

HERE’S THE INFO!!

Story Name: DEMIGODDESS

Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally. CC

Small Cover:

Large Cover:

LINK:

episodeinteractive.com

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Demigoddess

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!


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#31

It’s probably gonna be late before I get to read it

gisellec

    July 4

***HEY!! I’d love to do an R4R!***:grin:

HERE’S THE INFO!!

Story Name: DEMIGODDESS

Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally. CC

Small Cover:

Large Cover:

LINK:

episodeinteractive.com

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Demigoddess

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!


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#32

Okay, I’ve read the first two episodes and I’m pretty positive towards this story.
I’ll say that what I like about it is the fact that you’re mixing in greek mythology. Also, the twists are pretty surprising :grin:.
Criticism: the greek version of Hercules (according to the YouTube comment section) is Heracles.
In the dressing game, it would make more sense for the MC to change into the outfit I chose before dusting off.
Besides, her friends are somewhat mean.

gisellec

    July 4

***HEY!! I’d love to do an R4R!***:grin:

HERE’S THE INFO!!

Story Name: DEMIGODDESS

Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally. CC

Small Cover:

Large Cover:

LINK:

episodeinteractive.com

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Demigoddess

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!


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#33