Hey! I would like a story review! If your interested all you have to do is message me saying so, I will send you the story like then you can send me feedback! If you’re willing to help me out and give me tips (it’s a short ass chapter since I just started) on how to improve the story and ideas would be great! Thank you! - Mwa
sure i would love too
Great I’ll message you the story link
If you’re looking for someone to beta-read your story before publishing, I could do it
Hi i also dont mind doing a review for you
That’s great, here’s the link:
Hey looks great and alright so far!! It feels so natural and I love the comedy you’ve added in. Makes me want to read more. Carry on the with your story. It looks really promising!