Hey can you veiw my first story https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/5859504789782528


#1

I just finished my first story take a look please and I’m glad to accept any contrusctive criticism.


#2

Will love to view now! Ill reply later on what I think! :kissing_smiling_eyes:


#4

OKAY SOOOOO
I just got done reading all three and honestly I’m nerve fond to stories that are more like fantasy type BUTTTTT yours had me hooked I loved it and want more only thing I will add in is like a backstory about both alphas for example why are they at war ,what the alphas are, who they are little specks just to make the readers understand both of their backgrounds. I seen minimal spelling errors which is always good.Other than that I love the story the whole feeling of becoming Loveta and the changes AND you’re very descriptive which I love.


#5

OMG thanks so much. I can’t wait to get started on the.next episodes. And yeah I get what you are saying my plan was to get people hooked then dive deep in the background before I continue. Thanks again and I love the feed back.


#6

Plus it’s really helpful to know what the readers want from a story.


#7

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Title: THE NEW GUY
Author: KELZBLOGS
Genre: Gay/Romance
Style: INK
Summary: Justin is secretly gay but when the hot new guy from Cali comes along can he keep his secret and hide his feelings for the new guy who’s straight maybe.


#8

Alright I’ll read it. But can you tell me how you get your character to keep the same outfit on that they chose in the previous episode.


#9

Well I’ll answer it for example you do
@CHARACTER changes into outfit

EX:
@VANESSA changes into vanessapjs


#10

Basically have to keep doing that in beginning of the episode so it won’t be the same outfit from the previous episode


#11

Not my scene but the directing is good!


#12

No o want her to be in the same outfit as she was in the previous but the thing is that it’s a choice so I don’t know how to get them the same outfit