Hey Guys !! I have a problem with choices… I mean , let me make it clear…
Here is the thing… Actually I made a choice first , In the first choices my MC female ask the MC male to visit her dorm and in the second choice , she won’t
I did all this things right and Inside the first choice my MC female thinks to impress the MC male and decide to change her outfit. so here I added another choice for her outfit and it too works but after she changed her outfit , there is a small scene where the MC male come to visit her and so on… Here is the problem… This scene didn’t show up when I saved my story and preview it , rather it went directly to the next scene… Is there anyway to solve this problem or any kind of coding or something??
Please Guys … I seriously need your help… Please help me 
can you send a screenshot of ur script
Here is my script
NOAH
Let's meet up @ 9 AM
Will be there in your room within 5 min..
Get ready!!
readerMessage Chose Wisely!! You may even unlock some fun conversations😜… I guess you got what i mean…
NARRATOR
So, Do you want to let Noah inside your Dorm Room???
choice “Sure , Babe” {
NIKKI
Come on, Fast....
INT. CUTE BEDROOM GIRL - DAY
@NIKKI changes into Dorm outfit
@NIKKI stands screen center
@NIKKI faces right
label outfit_choicess
NIKKI (talk_think_neutral)
So , How should i be dressed to welcome Noah???
choice “SEXY” {
@NIKKI changes into SEXY
NIKKI (dustoff_neutral_loop)
Is this the one?
choice
“It’s perfect!” {
gain Flag_Name_10
#change the flag name to whatever you want
#flag names can only have letters, numbers, and underscores. No spaces
} “No, I want to try on the others!” {
goto outfit_choicess
}
OUTFIT 2 STARTS HERE
}“TRIBAL” {
@NIKKI changes into TRIBAL
#add your own dialogue and animations
NIKKI (dustoff_neutral_loop)
Is this the one?
choice
“It’s perfect!” {
gain Flag_Name_11
#change the flag name to whatever you want
#flag names can only have letters, numbers, and underscores. No spaces
} “No, I want to try on the others!” {
goto outfit_choicess
}
} “Whatever you wear now” {
@NIKKI changes into Dorm outfit
NIKKI (dustoff_neutral_loop)
Is this the one?
choice
“It’s perfect!” {
gain Flag_Name_11
#change the flag name to whatever you want
#flag names can only have letters, numbers, and underscores. No spaces
} “No, I want to try on the others!” {
goto outfit_choicess
}
INT. CUTE BEDROOM GIRL - DAY
@NIKKI walks to screen right
@NIKKI faces left
@NOAH changes into NOAH_default
@NOAH enters from left to screen left
@NOAH is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop
@pause for a beat
@NIKKI is flirt_coy
@NOAH is blush_shy
NOAH (flirt_coy)
You Look even more sexy , Beautiful!!
NIKKI (flirt_lookaway_bashful)
Thank you , Noah!!
}
} “Refuse Him” {
NIKKI
Will meet you outside my Dorm room
INT. CUTE BEDROOM GIRL - DAY
@NIKKI changes into Dorm outfit
@NIKKI is dustoff_neutral_loop
@NIKKI changes into Usual
@NIKKI exits left
}
EXT. OUTDOOR STREET LOOP - DAY
&follow NIKKI to screen right in zone 3
@follow NOAH to screen center in zone 3
&NIKKI faces right
@NOAH faces right
u didn’t put choice anywhere but u have }
and u can use labels instead of puting whole script in the choice so it can be more organised but u dont need to
Choice is at the 9 th line, If u check it again from the beginning
Thank you !! You really helped me a lot… But its not the problem… The scenes next to outfit choice is not previewing…
Try this
(you dont need to use flags just name a choice and then use if/elif/else if you want it to be remembered)
NOAH (animation)
Let’s meet up @ 9 AM
Will be there in your room within 5 min…
Get ready!!
readerMessage Chose Wisely!! You may even unlock some fun conversations😜… I guess you got what i mean…
NARRATOR
So, Do you want to let Noah inside your Dorm Room???
choice (dorm_scene)
“Sure, babe” {
NIKKI (animation)
Come on, Fast…
} “Refuse Him” {
NIKKI
Will meet you outside my Dorm room
goto refused
}
if (dorm_scene) “Sure, babe” {
INT. CUTE BEDROOM GIRL - DAY
&NIKKI stands screen center AND NIKKI faces right
@NIKKI changes into Dorm outfit
label outfit_choicess
NIKKI (talk_think_neutral)
So , How should i be dressed to welcome Noah???
choice (outfit_for_noah)
“SEXY” {
&NIKKI is dustoff_neutral_loop
@NIKKI changes into SEXY
goto choose_this_outfit
}“TRIBAL” {
&NIKKI is dustoff_neutral_loop
@NIKKI changes into TRIBAL
goto choose_this_outfit
} “Whatever you wear now” {
&NIKKI is dustoff_neutral_loop
@NIKKI changes into Dorm outfit
goto choose_this_outfit
}
label choose_this_outfit
@pause for 1
NIKKI (think_rubchin)
Is this the one?
choice
“Yes, I love it!” {
@NIKKI is flirt_wink_happy
} “No, I don’t like it.” {
goto outfit_choicess
}
INT. CUTE BEDROOM GIRL - DAY
@NIKKI walks to screen right
@NIKKI faces left
@NOAH changes into NOAH_default
@NOAH enters from left to screen left
@NOAH is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop
@pause for a beat
@NIKKI is flirt_coy
@NOAH is blush_shy
NOAH (flirt_coy)
You Look even more sexy , Beautiful!!
NIKKI (flirt_lookaway_bashful)
Thank you , Noah!!
goto continue_scene
label refused
INT. CUTE BEDROOM GIRL - DAY
@NIKKI changes into Dorm outfit
@NIKKI is dustoff_neutral_loop
@NIKKI changes into Usual
@NIKKI exits left
label continue_scene
EXT. OUTDOOR STREET LOOP - DAY
&follow NIKKI to screen right in zone 3
@follow NOAH to screen center in zone 3
&NIKKI faces right
@NOAH faces right
I really don’t know how to thank you !!! 
… I owe you one… tyssssssm
I am sure that i will give you credits in my story… So , how should i mention you??? 
my ig is lost.puppy.episode
im glad i helped 
Thank you… and sure i will give you credits in my story… and don’t forget to check my story. 
… I will release it within 2 days … i mean soon after my cover is reviewed… I will give you the link once i released my story… 
This should be:
if (dorm_scene is “Sure , Babe”) {
Can read more here:
Thank you so much… It worked…
No problem, you actually don’t even need it (line 71) since regardless, it’ll play through while the Refuse Him option will take you to label refused, skipping letting Noah inside the dorm room. Good luck with everything 
But it’s nice to save it using the choice name and option method if you want to reference it in the future 
Thank you so much… Actually i am a little confused with these codings and all …and @the.fallen.archangel is the one who helped me with that coding… Still Thank you so much
I went over your original code, you have this:
It should have been:
Basically your first code was fine but you just had the closing bracket in the wrong place 
But I’m glad everything’s fine now 
of course love 
Oh… I am struggling with these codes for 2 days and finally i found it … Thank you