Hi! I am brainstorming a story... How is this plot?

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Hi, so I had another thread about a plot, but I threw that one out.

THIS IS FOR A DIFFERENT STORY

Anywaysss… here it is:

Gianna never had a choice in what her future would be. She would work for her dad with her brother Will. Her dad works for a top secret section of the government which takes hospital patients with no future and using them for scientific purposes (dark, I know). To do so, Gianna “works” as a hospital nurse so the job is easier. She is assigned to kidnap Andrea Rivera, a mom of a son and daughter who was put into a coma after a car incident. Gianna then meets Carter and they begin to fall in love, until she realizes who Carter really is.
I won’t spoil the ending in case I publish it and you read it :wink:
Any suggestions??

Also

Do you have any title ideas??

PLEASE DON’T STEAL OR MAKE YOUR OWN SPIN OFF OF MY IDEA

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Sounds interesting :wink:

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Loving the plot

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Damn that twist

I’d read it :smile:

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I really think this could turn out to be a great story!

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@JemU776 @xetic @Simila100 @KKRICH
thx!! would you guys suggest any changes or anything??
I am wondering what a reader would want from this

I also tried to make it a little unique… do you think this is kinda new?

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I don’t even think it needs changed the plot is perfect!

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thank you so much!!

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Anytime :two_hearts:

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Also… do you have any title recommendations??

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Maybe this one (lol I couldn’t think of any other ones)
•Darkness, My love

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Ooh I like that!

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I feel like because you said the twist, there is no point in reading

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I think it’s awesome the way it is right now!

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