Hi I have a story idea but I don't how if I can successfully execute it!

Preview this and tell me if theres any changes you’d like me to make.
Don’t be shy to tell me if you’d like something different I’m happy to help :smile:

INT. ANGELA SCHOOL HALLWAY V1 - DAY
&NADINE stands screen center AND NADINE spot 0.895 196 176
&PHIL stands screen center AND PHIL spot 1.003 -62 130
&zoom on 4 263 to 246% in 0
@NADINE walks to spot 0.895 57 177 in 3 AND NADINE faces left
&PHIL is frustrated
&NADINE is think
@pause for 1
&NADINE walks to spot 0.895 -37 171 in 0.5 AND NADINE is startled_surprised
&PHIL walks to spot 1.003 -96 130 in 0.4
@transition fade out in 1

INT. JUVIE PHILLY LIBRARY - DAY
&PHIL stands screen center AND PHIL spot 0.871 118 158 AND PHIL is arms_crossed AND PHIL faces left
&NADINE stands screen center AND NADINE spot 0.811 38 176 AND NADINE is talk_repulsed

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