Hi! Need some honest feedback for my story!

[MaisonlaMoo]

I need some honest feedback here guys!
I’m still working on the 3rd episode, but I need help!
Here’s the link!

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: H*ck Up

So if you can help… Please do!!!

[Danielle318]

Feedback Group {OFFICIALLY OPEN}

WELCOME TO THE FEEDBACK GROUP!!!

Here you come to get feedback on your story, there are three of us @Forever1201 @Danielle318 & @AMagic if you would like to join PM me.

RULES

• You may not get upset over a truthful review.
• We can accept or deny your review. It will be denied if you don’t give us your Story Link, Title, & Cover, plus a description of your story.
• We are not robots, we have lives outside of the forums, so you must be patient.
• When you have gotten your feedback, make sure to rate our service.

WHAT WE JUDGE

• Grammar
• The Plot
• Directing
• Intro & Outro
• Sound
• Character Devolpment

Go here!

[Emmzy]

I’ll give it a go