Hi! R4R! (And feedback for feedback if you want!)

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#1

Hi everyone! I just published my story, Sirena, and I’m looking for new episodes to check out!

I’ll read 1-3 chapters of yours if you read 1-3 chapters of mine (just PM me a screenshot from one of my episodes and I’ll read the same amount of episodes)!

Please fill out the form in the comments and I’ll start reading yours once you’ve sent the PM!

FORM

Your Name:
Story Title:
Bio:
Link:
How many chapters do you want me to read (up to 3):
Do you want to do Feedback for Feedback?:
If so, what options do you want (letters):

My Story

Sirena


Bio: Sirena has a lot of choices to make and along the way you’ll meet: Aaron-the sweet human boy, Dante-the bad boy fairy King, and Rey-the high class fairy prince!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5302897890689024

FEEDBACK

This is if you want to do feedback for feedback!
Just tell me what options you want:

A. Characters:
*What I feel about them (so you can compare to how you wanted me to feel about them)
*If I think they are well-developed or not, and why!
*Who my favorite character is
*How I think they could improve
B. Plot:
*What I think about your plot
*What I think you could improve on
C. Animation/Directing
*Any specific issues I see with any of the animation/directing
*How I feel it flows
D. Overall
*How I feel about the Episode overall

If you request feedback for feedback, please PM me with the same options you picked out filled out about my story from your point of view :sparkling_heart:


#2

Could I have feedback on the characters and plotline? thanks :smile:

Title: Nocturnal
Author: CrazyCreativeMind
Episodes: 4 (More episodes coming soon)
Genre: Horror, romance
Style: Limelight
Description: It’s been a year since Eli’s sister was taken by soul-devouring demons. Now, they have come back for him and won’t stop until his sanity is lost and his soul is captured.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4775419765456896


#3

Heya! Let’s do a read 4 read? I’ll post screenshots :slight_smile:

Author: Fluffy Rice
Genre: Romantic Comedy
Style: Limelight
Description: Childhood friends reunited after 10 years. Both Sierra and Peter are unaware that they knew each other from the past. (Remake)
Episodes: 4 (Ongoing)
Instagram: @fluffyrice.episode

LINK https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/4771951097544704

This story is actually based on my own experiences in real life. ALSO, the cover arts are still Pending for Review, so the picture at the moment is the default art of the guy stepping on a banana peel.

(PS. It’s not the “Loving You Again (Discontinued)” story, that’s my old one in INK. The difference between the old and the remake is that the remake has more and better plot lines, and better directing!)


#4

Hey @carleebby

I finished your story, hope you can check out mine.


#5

Hey, I would love to do a R4R with you, I’ll start on your story right now.:slight_smile:
Here’s the details to my story:
Author: S_Unique
Title: The Four Horsemen
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5482099054608384


I would like feedback (all the options if possible :))
Read: 3 chapters


#6

Hi! I read the first three chapters of yours and wrote feedback so as soon as you PM me a screenshot from my 3rd episode of Sirena I’ll send you my feedback!


#7

Awwwwww omg your story was sooo cute!!! I love when your limelight character comes in and talks at the beginning/ends, it makes me feel like I get to know you as the author! I’ll probably read the fourth episode tonight just because I like it!


#8

I read your first three episodes and have feedback written for you! Just PM me a screenshot of the third episode of Sirena when you’ve read it and I’ll send you the feedback for 4 horseman :sparkling_heart:


#9


#10

Hey there! I could use some feedback on my story
Title: Cinder
Episodes: 3
Genre: Action
Description: humans and androids crowd the streets of New Beijing. A deadly plague ravages the population. From space, a ruthless lunar people watch, waiting to make their move. No one knows that Earth’s fate hinges on one girl…
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4959887487795200
Inspiration: Marissa Meyer
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#11

Awesome, I’m reading the first chapter now! Don’t forget to PM me a screenshot of my 3rd episode, after you do that and I finish reading I’ll send you feedback!


#12

Aww thank you! I’m glad you liked it!!! <3 <3