Hi! R4R! (And feedback for feedback if you want!)

Hi everyone! I just published my story, Sirena, and I’m looking for new episodes to check out!

I’ll read 1-3 chapters of yours if you read 1-3 chapters of mine (just PM me a screenshot from one of my episodes and I’ll read the same amount of episodes)!

Please fill out the form in the comments and I’ll start reading yours once you’ve sent the PM!

FORM

Your Name:
Story Title:
Bio:
Link:
How many chapters do you want me to read (up to 3):
Do you want to do Feedback for Feedback?:
If so, what options do you want (letters):

My Story

Sirena
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Bio: Sirena has a lot of choices to make and along the way you’ll meet: Aaron-the sweet human boy, Dante-the bad boy fairy King, and Rey-the high class fairy prince!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5302897890689024

FEEDBACK

This is if you want to do feedback for feedback!
Just tell me what options you want:

A. Characters:
*What I feel about them (so you can compare to how you wanted me to feel about them)
*If I think they are well-developed or not, and why!
*Who my favorite character is
*How I think they could improve
B. Plot:
*What I think about your plot
*What I think you could improve on
C. Animation/Directing
*Any specific issues I see with any of the animation/directing
*How I feel it flows
D. Overall
*How I feel about the Episode overall

If you request feedback for feedback, please PM me with the same options you picked out filled out about my story from your point of view :sparkling_heart:

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Could I have feedback on the characters and plotline? thanks :smile:

Title: Nocturnal
Author: CrazyCreativeMind
Episodes: 4 (More episodes coming soon)
Genre: Horror, romance
Style: Limelight
Description: It’s been a year since Eli’s sister was taken by soul-devouring demons. Now, they have come back for him and won’t stop until his sanity is lost and his soul is captured.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4775419765456896

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Hey, I would love to do a R4R with you, I’ll start on your story right now.:slight_smile:
Here’s the details to my story:
Author: S_Unique
Title: The Four Horsemen
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5482099054608384


I would like feedback (all the options if possible :))
Read: 3 chapters

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Hi! I read the first three chapters of yours and wrote feedback so as soon as you PM me a screenshot from my 3rd episode of Sirena I’ll send you my feedback!

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Awwwwww omg your story was sooo cute!!! I love when your limelight character comes in and talks at the beginning/ends, it makes me feel like I get to know you as the author! I’ll probably read the fourth episode tonight just because I like it! image

I read your first three episodes and have feedback written for you! Just PM me a screenshot of the third episode of Sirena when you’ve read it and I’ll send you the feedback for 4 horseman :sparkling_heart:

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Hey there! I could use some feedback on my story
Title: Cinder
Episodes: 3
Genre: Action
Description: humans and androids crowd the streets of New Beijing. A deadly plague ravages the population. From space, a ruthless lunar people watch, waiting to make their move. No one knows that Earth’s fate hinges on one girl…
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4959887487795200
Inspiration: Marissa Meyer
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Awesome, I’m reading the first chapter now! Don’t forget to PM me a screenshot of my 3rd episode, after you do that and I finish reading I’ll send you feedback!

Feel free to check mine out. :slight_smile:

Author name: Jannah Jackson
My story: Thriller: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Description/Bio: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288
Episodes to read 3
Feedback for Feedback please on all of this:
A. Characters:
*What I feel about them (so you can compare to how you wanted me to feel about them)
*If I think they are well-developed or not, and why!
*Who my favourite character is
*How I think they could improve
B. Plot:
*What I think about your plot
*What I think you could improve on
C. Animation/Directing
*Any specific issues I see with any of the animation/directing
*How I feel it flows
D. Overall
*How I feel about the Episode overall

Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Story style: Secret Surprise :wink:

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Title: Ocean’s 5
Author: Lara P.
Genre: Action
Chapters: 3 out (more coming soon)
Style: Ink
Description: Five highly skilled and most dangerous people on Earth are brought together for the biggest heist ever seen. What can go wrong?
Instagram: @larapstories
Link: https://episode.app.link/mRmxbzLPYR

read4read?

My story: PRINCESS OF DARYA
Author: Cece
Genre: Fantasy
Story style: Limelight
Description: Four Princesses of the Elements rule the world together. When one is kidnapped, the Protectors (an ancient people) must step in as bodyguard warrior/trainers. Romance and adventure follow. CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 13 (more coming soon)
Instagram: @cc_episodewriter
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5627899985395712

Cover:

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This is my story, let me know … …if you want to R4R,

Story Title: Do i belong to him ?
Author: Pearl (me)
Genre: Drama Mystery
Style: Limelight
Completed? No (ongoing)
Customization: yes

Description: This story tells about you will meet with alumni.

This alumni has a background that is very difficult to explain.

However,you will get obstacles. And so many mystery inside.

What’s that? Let’s read…

ps: I’m looking to grow my supports ( readers), I would love to reach 1k reads by the end of this year. Please leave feedback/fanmail if you read my story,:hugs: really appreciate it:hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs:

Link:

episodeinteractive.com

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Do I Belong To Him? (Ep no.5 out)

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

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The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Do I Belong To Him?

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

ps: I’m looking to grow my supports ( readers), Please leave feedback/fanmail if you read my story, :hugs: really appreciate it:hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs:

if u interesting, please reply:hugs::wink:

I’d love to read for read and give feedback, I’ll give the deets now

Thank you for this thread! <3 I would be willing to do a read for read with you if you’re interested! I, unfortunately, do not have access to my PMs so I can’t message you right now. Sorry!
My name: Lizzy.Writes
Story title: Sorry, Wrong Number
Bio: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960
How many chapters do I want you to read: 2
Do I want feedback for feedback: No thank you!
Some extra info: Genre is thriller

I’d like a feedback for feedback concerning characters and plot :slight_smile:

Title: Criminally Lovestruck
Author: Claire P.
Episodes: 3 (Ongoing)
Genre: Mystery
Style: Limelight
Description: When a case turns personal, a rookie police detective gets more than what she signed up for— a city with a bloody and escalating gang war, inner rivalries, and romantic intrigue.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5791197795057664

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3/3, D feedback.

Story: Blades of Desire

Author: Giselle C.

Genre: Mystery/Horror/Drama/Romance

Description: You thought going from rich to poor is the worst thing that could happen to you. Think again… a hot murderer is in town and he’s looking for you.

Features: Advanced directing, non-cliche plot line, choices matter, FULL character customization, unique and big closet, POC and LGBTQ characters, LGBTQ option, mini games.

Episodes: 3, 4 coming soon.

Covers:

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Link:

I wound love to do r4r :slight_smile:
Here is my story :slight_smile: :slight_smile:
Story Title: Blind Date with Millionaire
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance
Author: Senada
Published : 3 Chapters
Description:
You went on a blind date with a handsome young millionaire. What will happen when you wake up in the same bed?(Romance&Drama)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5658695975895040

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Hey, I am a new author, just started yesterday, and I would LOVE for you to read my three chapters and tell me what you think about it!

Title: Under The Shadows
Author: Kirara
Genre: Murder, Mystery, Romance
Summary: What starts as a romance novel, it develops into a murder mystery! Join Hope Edevane & CO to unravel what’s happenning at your university, and maybe, end up with the hottie!
Chapters: 3 (Currently working on 4!)
Style: Limelight

Create your own characters and Choices Matter :smile:

Thank you!