Hiii can you guys read my story

so my story needs atleast 100 reads for the squad contest to even be considered and i’ve only go 12 so far so im just here to promote it again i spent alot of time on it so i would really appreciate it even if you have to tap through it :pensive:

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When is the dead line for the contest? You should try promoting it on Instagram, too, or I can give it a shout out on my Instagram if you don’t have Instagram.

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I did promote it there as well :sob: they said 3-6 weeks

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Good luck! I’ll read through it.

What’s your Instagram?

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thank you so much my insta is sky.on.episode

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So far, I love it! I love the introduction, explanation, and the backgrounds you used! The spot directing is really good. I recommend that you get a proofreader, as there are many grammatical mistakes. (You should fix the description to make it grammatically correct and make it clear). A lot of readers may chose not to read your story if the story description has a lot of mistakes. Make sure to capitalize I, include commas, and punctuate the end of ALL your sentences. Don’t put a space between the last letter of a word and a period/comma either. For example, write “hey ,” as “hey,”.

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im going to take your advice im proofreading it today :blush:

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The plural of a hero is heroes. Hero’s indicated possession. Such as a hero’s dog, a hero’s power, etc. Heroes means many heroes.

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i noticed that aswell :tired_face:

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