sorry if this is in the wrong categoryy
so, i’m writin’ a story, but i’m not sure if this is a good title. it b helpful if you could suggest some ideas or give me feedback <33
i don’t have an official 180 char. description, so i’ll just sum up the plot:
haven rose williams has fallen in love multiple times, each being unrequited. she could never win the heart of her chosen one, eventually leading her to repress her romantic emotions since she was afraid they’d never be returned, and ruining her view of men, love, and heartbreak. haven assumed she didn’t have enough energy to deal with a real relationship. but after being diagnosed with a deadly disease, it seems as if she doesn’t have much time left, and haven decides to keep if from her friends-- anyone other than immediate family. one day she would just… disappear. a boy who’s been invisible to her almost her entire life suddenly shows up, and she realizes she’s found a safe place. so has he. someone she can confide in, and it scares her, nearly to death, if she wasn’t on the verge of dying. only issue is that he has secrets too. and hearing them could potentially ruin haven… before her disease does.
as of now, it’s called safe haven mostly because it means having some place-- someone, or something, that makes you feel protected, or able to confide in. not to mention haven makes him feel safe.
i swear, the narration and character development will be worth reading. i’m sorry if it sounds cliche, it certainly won’t be.
any tips? ideas? thank you <3