I got unlimited passes and I’m looking for some new stories to be obsessed with, post your story link and a short description below and I’ll read at least 3 episodes and comment a review. Lemme know if you’d rather have a private review in your post.
Hello!!! I’m struggling for some feedback for my story which was published a few months ago, 12 episodes are out and I’d be more than excited if you’re willing to give me an honest opinion on this story if you have the time!
Story title: Just Us
Story description: The story is about 2 friends, Seth and Tara who grew up together. Tara suffers from PTSD and the story starts with them trying to get their life back on track after a tragic incident that changed them forever…What have they been through?
Thanks in advance!
I’don’t know what happened!
Titel: Worth It
Description: A short story about Doria, a girl with anxiety trying to beat it.
I would love to hear your review in private message
Hi I am Insiyah, my story name is Back To You.
The story revolves around Zara Levine.Its been 5yrs, she left New York, her home, to gain a degree in fashion designing but there was more to it, due to which she made a decision to never come back. but destiny holds something else for her and she is forced to return back. Drama awaits at New York for her.
Story link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5549210055344128
please do read my story.
First off I like not having to play a dressing game from the jump, that’s a huge plus, major points for not making the reader go through a character’s morning routine before getting to the story. The chapters aren’t too long or too short, the pacing is for the most part great, you don’t jump from plot point to plot point and you don’t have pointless filler scenes. I like that there seems to be secondary and tertiary story lines but it feels messy, it’s a little difficult to keep track of everyone. I get that the details are important to the main plot but maybe you could cut some of those scenes and disperse the information through the main characters. It’s hard to ask a reader to care about so many characters at once and it makes the story feel a bit out of focus. Despite that I was with the shit up until chapter 3, I don’t care enough about the parents as a reader for that backstory to be interesting, it felt like a long info dump and to be honest I skipped through a lot of it. Again there has to be a better way to disseminate this information without stopping the trajectory of the main plot line. There were some grammar issues in the dialog and a few code issues (like the scene after the convo with Thomas in chapter two the zoom was off and I couldn’t see the characters) but I can get passed stuff like that and I was still entertained up until chapter 3. What really took me out of the story at times what the dialog itself. A lot of it, especially with the adults, felt too formal, like the principal literally sounded like the butler from Batman. Some of the kids’ dialog feels clunky and makes it really clear that you’re not from California and don’t have a total grasp on the way California teens talk (which by the way is just like any other American teens for the most part). Thomas was probably the worst on that front, I felt like he kept going back and forth from surfer dude to British school boy, mate. There were a few other small things, like I don’t think her parents would have had cell phones in the 90s where I assume that flashback took place (unless it took place now and the actual story takes place in the future which would be cool and I’m sorry if that’s where this is going and I spoiled a plot point). I think you should study up on the Bay Area a little more, like maybe watch some documentaries or something. Also I think if you’re going to cuss you should commit, like there’s really no need for ths sht just say shit, yuh know? All in all though you had me until chapter three and I’m probably going to keep reading, it’s a decent story I just think it could use some research and some tightening up. If you want advice or help feel free to comment or PM me anytime.
Title : Flawless
Genre : Comedy
Author : Raisy S
Description : To be one of the elites of the fashion’s world, you need to overcome hard choices between friendship, fame and love to become #FLAWLESS
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4701844563689472
Hey guys! I know that writing stories and getting views on them is pretty hard! So thats why I wanted to do this READ FOR READ ( not to mention, I ended up having a lot of free time). Come on, face it … we all want our stories to be read or seen !
If you want me to Review your story then visit my topic
Link:Read for Read :)#Story views! and Reviews! 9 more stories to go!
But you would have to read my story first and provide me a proof (eg. A screen shot showing the number of episodes read)
Only then I will start reading your stories!
My Instagram: navya.episode
**So this is how it works! :- **
If you read 3 episodes of my story I’ll read 3 of your episodes.
If you read 5 episodes, I’ll read 5 as well !!
**Title: Enagaged **
Author: Navya Sallan
**Genere: Comedy **
Episodes: episode 6 is OUT!
Description: what happens when you suddenly find out that you are engaged to a hot stranger in America and you are forced to move to America with him!!!
Here’s my story:
Description: If you can’t get away from darkness, you learn to live with it… A vampire story!
Episodes: 4 (more to come)
I hope you like it
Title: Sweet Innocence
Description: Aliss Winston is a pure, sweet and naive teenager. That is, until her innocent soul gets tarnished by little incidents.
Note: The first chapter shows how the MC’s typical daily life looked like until small changes started happening, hence the plot is not yet very diverse and may appear dull.
The Princess Trials
Story description: in a kingdom of limited opportunities 10 girls fight for the right to rule the kingdom. Will it be you?
Here’s my story
Title: Only you can give me that feeling.
Episodes: 3, ongoing.
Description: Melanie is 21 years old and has always followed the path that’s been set for her…until now. Follow the crumbling relationships of her family and the budding romance with Brody.
Title: Secret of Changes
Description: A 14 year old girl, full of imagination, randomly visions the future and is confused about her family’s past and her present. Can she figure it all out before high school starts?
Episodes: 2 (ongoing)
Enjoy! Please DM me to make any improvements or any suggestions.
I would love your feedback to be PM’ed.
Title: Illegal Alien
Author: Literally Dead
Description: Stella befriends a stranger who stops her from committing suicide. Follow her life as she uncovers secrets of the mystery man and her own mortality.
Name: Prominent Gift
Author: Gia Morina
Description: Kidnapped at 16, Piper finally escapes after three years. She finds herself in the home of the soon to be Alpha King. What happens when her kidnappers come looking for her? How long can the Alpha King keep her protected?
Title: Addilyn Meets Life… the game
Description: Basically about a schizophrenic girl named Addilyn trying to survive her “new life” and overcome her illness.
Hi! I would love to hear your feedback on my story. I am a new writer and would love to know how I can make my story (and probably future stories better).
Title: The Goddess
Genre: Drama/ Fantasy
Story Description: Rae is a goddess who was punished to live among mortals. Little did she know that love, drama, and secrets are about to unravel before her very eyes once she steps foot on Earth.
Thank you and hope you’ll like it.
Hey!) I’d be really glad if you read my story and will be obsessed with it
Title: Until You Knocked On My Door
Number of Episodes:6 ongoing
Description: Life plays a cruel joke with us sometimes. And this girl is no exception. She couldn’t even imagine, that only ONE KNOCK on the door can turn her whole difficult life upside down.