Honest Feedback And Continue Ideas Would Be Appreciated (TW)

ELI
We need a break.

ANNA’s face goes dark and she’s soon surrounded by darkness

DEMON
You’re pathetic.

DEMON
Nobody as good as Eli is gonna love a screwup like you.

DEMON
Victoria right, Jamie stopped calling because he doesn’t love you.

DEMON
Why don’t you leave? Nobody will miss you.

Anna’s brought back to reality and falls to her knees, sobbing

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can u please untag me? :pleading_face:
I suck at ideas :sob: (and feedbacks)

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I see that you ask for advice/ideas a lot maybe it would be better if you went with your own opinion. Do you think it works? It’s your story. People don’t have an opinion on every single thing that you do.

Or you should find a partner who has similar ideas who will brainstorm with you! Tagging a bunch of people repeatedly may get annoying. Clearly you need help with ideas/feedback and a partner would help much more than making all of these topics! It’s also less effort for you lol

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You can still try to find partners for your own good :smiley: There are a bunch of people who are willing to help you.

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Hey! I saw that you were stil struggling with your story so I found a few threads that may help! :blob_sun: :blob_hearts:

https://forums.episodeinteractive.com/t/if-you-ask-for-help-feedback-advice-be-able-to-receive-it-rant/490893

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It’s just a break, and Anna had a lot of demons due to being ABUSED for 6 years

Her reaction was due to her demons

@Sydney_H can you close this?

Closed due to excessive off-topic posting.