ELI
We need a break.
ANNA’s face goes dark and she’s soon surrounded by darkness
DEMON
You’re pathetic.
DEMON
Nobody as good as Eli is gonna love a screwup like you.
DEMON
Victoria right, Jamie stopped calling because he doesn’t love you.
DEMON
Why don’t you leave? Nobody will miss you.
Anna’s brought back to reality and falls to her knees, sobbing
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MMG
January 5, 2021, 5:19pm
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can u please untag me?
I suck at ideas (and feedbacks)
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I see that you ask for advice/ideas a lot maybe it would be better if you went with your own opinion. Do you think it works? It’s your story. People don’t have an opinion on every single thing that you do.
Or you should find a partner who has similar ideas who will brainstorm with you! Tagging a bunch of people repeatedly may get annoying. Clearly you need help with ideas/feedback and a partner would help much more than making all of these topics! It’s also less effort for you lol
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MMG
January 5, 2021, 5:26pm
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You can still try to find partners for your own good There are a bunch of people who are willing to help you.
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Hey! I saw that you were stil struggling with your story so I found a few threads that may help!
Hi! I’m willing to help anyone out there who needs help with their story!! If you need help either in proofreading, writing a certain scene, a description, literally anything, I’d be more than happy to lend you a hand. Completely for free by the way! Just let me know and I’ll get back to you ASAP! :))
I need a writing partener
I need a writing partener
I enjoy writing and English is my first language, if you need someone to help bounce ideas off or need me to point out any obvious mistake, I can try and help.
Insta is @ Bakedpotato.episode you can contact me there
Contact me on Instagram, I am here for everyone!!
(maddie_robert122)
Just wanted to say y’all are all worth it!!
I could also help with episode stuff…!
I consider myself a creative person and I would like to help you with your story if you are just starting or if you have a writing block. I do this because I want to distract myself from college and I don’t want to bother my co-writer 24/7 because I need help with the coding.
I can help you with character development, unique personalities, conflicts, and things like that. <3
https://forums.episodeinteractive.com/t/if-you-ask-for-help-feedback-advice-be-able-to-receive-it-rant/490893
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It’s just a break, and Anna had a lot of demons due to being ABUSED for 6 years
Her reaction was due to her demons
@Sydney_H can you close this?
Sydney_H
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January 5, 2021, 10:52pm
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Closed due to excessive off-topic posting.