Tbh, it feels really dry, I’m not sure what’s going on exactly. I think Anna’s reaction to Eli ignoring her is normal, but it doesn’t make too much sense how it suddenly skips to a few weeks later that she’s attempting to talk to her. If they’re friends and Eli wants to remain that way, then yeah she should probably feel guilty. I mean no hate at all, if this came off as rude or harsh I’m really sorry .
Anna’s friend kissed her without her consent, Eli asked for a break and has ignored her for weeks despite Anna trying every day to talk. That’s what’s going on.
Close your eyes. Imagine you are ELI. How would she respond to that? Go ahead and write that.
Well, what do you think? Tbh, anything can be normal. It depends on the character’s personality and how they deal with things.
As I said, it’s based on ELI’s personality and how they deal with things. But your the one who’s crafting the story. I think your opinion and choice matters most.