Honest feedback PLEASE!

Looking for honest feedback on my story this is my first story on episode and would appreciate any and all feedback on my story thank you in advance for taking the time out. Also shout out to all the writer’s on Episode it truly is an art and hardworking to produce a great story on there so thank you for inspiring me to write my own. :heart_eyes::kissing_heart::smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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