Honest feedback, reviews, and ideas for stories!



I want stories new stories to read, and I’m happy to review some. If you have a story, and want some honest feedback reply to this post. Also if you want an ides for a new story or how to improve yours reply on this thread. Give me your story name, the author name, and the link, and I’ll be good. I’ll read at least 1 whole chapter for each story.

Please read my story, it’s called “The Alphabet Kisser.” The first three episodes are short and not well written, but the 4th episode is way better. You can also follow my Instagram account: @jessicab.episode

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me please!


Hi. I’d love some honest feedback on my story with Episode Royalty. It’s called Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future! I’d love to hear what you think of it. :blush:

Story Title: Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
Author Name: Winter05 with Episode Royalty
Customization?: Limited
Style: INK
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 6 [COMPLETE]
Story Description: All it takes is one shot to change your whole life. Win or lose, nothing will ever be the same.
Instagram Names: @winter05.episode with @penroyalty
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6395210318086144


Feel free to leave me fanmail! :hugs:


It’s called Hale Huna
Written by Anonymous Author


Thanks for replying, I’ll read it now and give you feedback soon!


Thank you! :heart:


No problem.


Thanks for replying! I’ll read yours second!


Thank you


Hope you can read mine too🤗
Title: Out of them…box?!



Thank you for replying! You’ll be third, and I’ll get to you as soon as possible!


Thanks​:hugs:hope you enjoy :wink:


It was a good story. I would’ve never suspected something like that. But I was a little confused at first of what happened. Then I started to understand, and now I get the title. I would give some more background information on Alyson and some other characters before Alyson goes to the future. Also, I would give more flashbacks of what she missed, unless you’ve done so on the later chapters. But I would rate it a 7/10.


Hey! I’ve created 2 stories so far, and I would love it if you’d check 'em out!! :heartbeat:


Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally. CC

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The Ember Moon Pack

Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Description: You’re an average highschool girl. What’ll happen to your life when you get kidnapped by a pack of Hybrids that claim that you are their sacred Queen? CC, ChoicesMatter, 5Endings

Genre: Fantasy

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5387476824358912

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Title: Inseparable
Author: TeahWalker323
Genre: Romance/Comedy
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Hi! Thank for creating this thread! I`d love to get a review!
Story title: Let the demon inside

Author: Nierido
Genre: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?
Number of episodes:5
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4876381520789504


Name: The Pregnancy Curse
Author: Dr.Smile
Genre: Comedy
Description: Being the bad boy always seems like fun and games, but for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. Too bad Tristan Stuart realized this way too late. [Male MC]
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6624440286052352


I like the family. It’s a strong, diverse family but with struggles and a bad past. I like that because their not perfect. I like Kendall because she can stand up for herself.
The characters keep moving their lips when they’re not speaking. And they still do actions after they finish speaking. So after they finish speaking you can put like:
@ Kendall is (happy or sad) whichever emotion they’re feeling, but make sure it doesn’t say talking in the action.

I rate it 8/10, it’s a pretty good story.


Thanks, were there any grammatical errors?


Story; No changes after a year…
Name; Teddy’s Dollhouse
Link; http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6385627538259968