Honest feedback wanted

Hey, I’m a new author on Episode and I have just published my first story and for this reason I would like honest opinions. Can you help me?

I can give you some feedback! Can you place a link to your story? Also, what style is it Ink, or Limelight?

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Thank you very much! The style is LL
This is the link:

Cool, I’ll get to it shortly!

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Thanks :slight_smile:

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I just finished Episode 1 and it was great so far!
Your directing was fine!

I think I saw 1 Grammar error, but I don’t remember where it was! Maybe someone else can find it?

Here are some screenshots

I’ll get to Episodes 2 and 3 later on today.

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Thanks! I’m happy that you liked the story! :wink:

Tay11 I think the grammar mistake is in screenshot #2, where Alexis is telling Emma ‘You should know what happen in the city.’ Happen is happened


Thanks :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

no prob

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