Honest feedback wanted

_Alyssa_Episode · January 29, 2020, 9:50pm

Hey, I’m a new author on Episode and I have just published my first story and for this reason I would like honest opinions. Can you help me?

Tay11 · January 29, 2020, 10:18pm

I can give you some feedback! Can you place a link to your story? Also, what style is it Ink, or Limelight?

_Alyssa_Episode · January 29, 2020, 10:22pm

Thank you very much! The style is LL
This is the link:

Tay11 · January 29, 2020, 10:23pm

Cool, I’ll get to it shortly!

_Alyssa_Episode · January 29, 2020, 10:50pm

Thanks

Tay11 · January 29, 2020, 10:53pm

I just finished Episode 1 and it was great so far!
Your directing was fine!

I think I saw 1 Grammar error, but I don’t remember where it was! Maybe someone else can find it?

Here are some screenshots

I’ll get to Episodes 2 and 3 later on today.

_Alyssa_Episode · January 29, 2020, 10:56pm

Thanks! I’m happy that you liked the story!

HaAnh · January 30, 2020, 5:06am

Tay11 I think the grammar mistake is in screenshot #2, where Alexis is telling Emma ‘You should know what happen in the city.’ Happen is happened

_Alyssa_Episode · January 30, 2020, 8:36am

Thanks

HaAnh · January 31, 2020, 11:02am

no prob

system · March 1, 2020, 9:02pm

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