Honest feedback


#1

Looking for new and interesting stories to read, happy to review it as well. If you have a new story and want some help with any ideas on what might need improving or just someone to read your story. You can private message me or reply to this thread.

I am only able to review 3 or 4 episodes.


#2

Hey, thanks for this. Please PM me the review @Episode-Royalty’s newest story! :slight_smile:

Title: Surviving Love
Author: Episode Royalty
Description: Does distance really make the heart grow fonder? Or does it destroy everything you worked hard to keep? Distance may be a killer. Will you survive?
Style: INK
Episodes Released: 3 (ongoing)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4976796156428288

Thanks,
Winter - Episode Royalty :crown:


#3

Hi @Joe_Harvelle I’d appreciate a review on my first story:

Title: Lost Boy Lost Girl
Author: MrBitPlayer
Genre: (Drama/Romance)
Art: Limelight!
Description: Will a lonely girl next door and troubled boy be able to overcome the challenges in their lives that inevitably bring them closer together?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6253275339161600

(My story is not finished atm and is unpublished because I’m waiting on my cover arts and splashes, so I would like some feedback and tips before I make it official.)


#4

Please PM me the review
Title: Niklaus Grand children
Author: Jazmend esparza
Description: Meet Niklaus grandchildren all 7 of them. turns out hope was the first born after all. Or was she?
Style: INK
Episodes Released: 10 (ongoing)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6153081077366784

Thanks


#5

Hi! Thanks for doing this for us. I am always looking for more tips to improve my story. You can PM me or post your review here as a comment, whatever suits you.

Story Title: Spotlight: Jellyfished
Author: Himawari
Genre: Mystery (/romance)
Description: Did you know? Jellyfish do not have hearts. Yet they live. What if a human, a woman, would lose this vital organ…and live?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5598230056927232


#6

Hello episode users.
I believe I could do an eye for eye scenario also but you know a story for a story. you read my story and I will read yours. you can follow me on instagram and dm your link to your story or you could post it on here.
I also just uploaded a story called - read my mind. You can find it in the romance category. There is only three chapters so far but it will be continued.
here is the link and it is also on my instagram page @ episode.readmymind
The best way to reach me with your story is via. Instagram. I hope to read some amazing stories soon! thank you <3


#7

Hi, Joe!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush:

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af


#8

Thank you for the submissions I will probably get back to you later today, I will go in the order posted on here so I will start with the first comment and work down.


#9

Hi!! I would love your feedback! Here is my story:

H&V: DELIRIOUS
5 cities| 1 connection| 1 villain
…How does it feel to be linked mentally and physically to 4 other strangers…?
…Will you fight, love or gain metahuman powers…?
…What if the love of your life is a villain😈…?
:boom::boom:out now​:boom::boom:
link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6429101962952704
instagram: @episode.asined
credits to @coveresque for the cover


#10

[DEMON GOD]
Author: E.Z.
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Chapters: 8 (on going)
Instagram: @e.z.episode
Description: He starved himself for three hundred years in order to abide by a woman’s promise. Everyone in Devildom is waiting for him to die.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/46786733136936961


#11

I have reviewed your story now @MrBitPlayer, I sent you a private message.


#12

Hi Joe,
I recently published my first story and would like some honest feedback!

Title: H & V: Lie to me
Author: Alexandra Mar
Genre: Drama/Mystery with romantic subplots
Description: After only serving 3 years of a 25 to life sentence, Aiden Suarez is mysteriously released. But wait, what’s that? Oh right, “Aiden Suarez” no longer exists.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6378501067505664


#13

I have reviewed all your stories now, I hope my reviews helped.


#14

Hi

I would love some feedback on this story, it’s not published yer

Find link above


#15

Hello, can you please review my story:
Author: Limelight Stories
Story Title: No Choice but Murder
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5587433727328256


#16

Hey, it’s Winter…again. I just published my newest story which I’m really proud of! :hugs: Please PM me my review.

Story Title: Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
Author Name: Winter05 with Episode Royalty
Story Link:


Instagram: winter05.episode

I hope you enjoy it! :blush:

~ Winter05 :snowflake:


#17

Hi again Winter, I will have a look at your story now. I should have it sent to you later tonight.


#18

Great, thanks again! :heart:


#19

No problem, you really helped me with the review you gave me.


#20

Some feedback would be amazing!
Title: The Next Stage
Author: Lisa.p
Genre: Comedy
Description: Stephen & Molly, Stephen a lovable fool and Molly an inspiring artist. Follow them on to the next chapter of their lives.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5833794190180352 1
Instagram: @lisa.p.episode