Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!
If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, the story will keep you hooked
My story details:
Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728