So I went ham on it so if it is a bit much (I already know) Em I will most likely never use this for the story but it is fun to practice!
Time Doing This - 30 minutes max (I believe lmfao)
For when you cut out your characters, maybe try to make the lines a little cleaner? With the gun, try to make it look like it’s in his hand—not hovering on the back of his hand?
Other than that—it looks great!!
Yeah I tried and the gun i added last second not sure I liked it to begine with lmfao but thanks so much!