What are your opinions?
It looks cute.
it looks nice, but idk what to say other than that since that the sweater and skirt are already combined together in the portal-
I think you should definitely remove the sweater. It looks so weird
I think you should make her look more original, like add tattoos, makeup, etc.

You can’t.
well yeah it works :3
In all honesty, it’s nice but very plain. I would experiment with different layers of clothing, jewelry, and shoes. Good combinations equal a very good style. This is by opinion, I overall like it for a causal occasion 
Oooh, ok. Well other than that’s it’s okay
It looks good but i dont think the pink lipstick matches. Maybe a lighter pink or natural color.
The lipstick is her look since the beginning of the story.
Try and do the lips as beige gloss!
Oh okay, sorry!

Nope. That’s her lipstick for the whole story. And it’s important to an art scene. I’m not using this particular outfit anymore anyways
Oh okay, sorry…
All I could suggest is try and add differ t types of clothes to show her mood, eg - sweats if she is depressed etc. Try and add as much detail as you can, but don’t make her look like she tries to hard to impress.
She’s not depressed, and she already doesn’t dress to impress all the time
I didn’t mean she wa depressed 
I meant it as an example of her moods.
What I try to remember when I create mine is that you need to stick to a main style for each character or else it gets confusing.,
