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Author: Jadlyss
Genre: Romance
Style: INK
Description: In honor of her father, Ashlynn applies to the high school of their dreams! Once she reaches the steps into Thompson Aviation, she faces an obscurity…It’s an all boys high school!
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Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5800348633399296
Extra notes: I’m currently fixing all of the speech bubble mistakes right now, and this story contains some art scenes
If you want review on Pm or on here: Here!
Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense) Title: Save Me, Hero! Author: Turtle Cat! Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of fugitives who are forcing her to join them. What will she do? Style: Ink
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Title: Too much baby mama drama Author: Lex Genre: Drama Style: Ink Description: He has baby mama drama and a lot of it! Will you be able to deal with it or will you find comfort in the arms of someone else?
Story Title: XENA PIERCE
Author: sophiesophilatte
Story Genre: ACTION
Style: Limelight
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An HEIRESS, a DAUGHTER, a GIRL who seeks answers–guide XENA KATSUMI PIERCE as she fights in order to save her mother. Will she make it through? Her SURVIVAL depends on YOU. (CM)
Title: Blades of Desire Author: Giselle C. Genre: Drama Style: LL Small cover:
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Your life was perfect: hot BF, rich, and gorgeous. Will Graham help you win back the life that you had lost, or will you get caught up in Romans’ heat? (Choices matter)
_Title: Capture the Moment
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Comedy
Style: Limelight
Description: Takoda is a photographer who inspires to become freelance and expand his portfolio. Can he snapshot his way to success?
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Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Genre: drama
Style: Limelight
Description: After years of searching, she had finally found them. Can she get close to them?
Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose - who will she become?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5874052041146368
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Story Title: Reckless Story Author: MoonFlareStories Genre: Drama, Romance Episodes published: 4 (incomplete) Description: You’re off on your own in the city. But being young (and hired by a rich businessman to keep his affairs separate) it doesn’t take long for you to sweep up a giant mess cc & choices matter Do you want review sent here or in DM here Style Limelight Linkhttp://episodeinteractive.com/s/5735134442422272 Small cover:
Hi, I would love if you could please give my story a read, if you have the time.
Title : Way Back Author: Rex Genre: Romance, Mystery, Thriller, Drama Style: Limelight Description: Something terrible happened to MC’s BFF and she feels at blame for it, so she distances herself from all things and people who remind her of that night and distracts/busies herself with her career (acting and singing). The only problem with that is, you can only run from your problems for so long. What happens when her past starts to catch up with her? Read to find out! Cover Pic:
Story Link:HERE Extra notes : It responsibly deals with mental health, the death of a loved one, faith, and substance abuse ( meaning I did research and consulted people ). If you want feedback on here or PM: A review on here is fine
_Title: Search for love
Author: S.writes
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Description:Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation.Can you find the love you’re looking for trying to escape?