Hey! Request for a honset review here to help improve your story! I will give my honest opinion, i will give you constructive critism to help you improve.
I will review your first episode as if readers don’t enjoy episode 1 they probably won’t conitnue reading. I will be giving honest and constructive critism. If I am hooked I will continue to read
That I'll review on
Grammer and spelling etc:
conversations and narration:
Overall thoughts and tips
Story rating: /100
I wont review if you:
-You aren’t patient, it takes time to review stories thoroughly
-The form below isn’t filled correctly!
If you want feedback on here or PM:
Looking forward to read your stories!!
EDIT! Something has recently popped up so i don’t have time to review, hopefully I will be able to later in the month :((