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#1

Hey! Request for a honset review here to help improve your story! I will give my honest opinion, i will give you constructive critism to help you improve.

I will review your first episode as if readers don’t enjoy episode 1 they probably won’t conitnue reading. I will be giving honest and constructive critism. If I am hooked I will continue to read :slight_smile:

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Story rating: /100

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-You aren’t patient, it takes time to review stories thoroughly
-The form below isn’t filled correctly!

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Looking forward to read your stories!! :heart:

EDIT! Something has recently popped up so i don’t have time to review, hopefully I will be able to later in the month :((

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#2

Author: Jadlyss
Genre: Romance
Style: INK
Description: In honor of her father, Ashlynn applies to the high school of their dreams! Once she reaches the steps into Thompson Aviation, she faces an obscurity…It’s an all boys high school!
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Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5800348633399296
Extra notes: I’m currently fixing all of the speech bubble mistakes right now, and this story contains some art scenes :heart:
If you want review on Pm or on here: Here!

#3

I would love to!

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense)
Title: Save Me, Hero!
Author: Turtle Cat!
Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of fugitives who are forcing her to join them. What will she do?
Style: Ink
This story has 4 episodes
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HERE’S THE LINK!
Through PM please! Thank you!

#4

Hi, I’d like a review plz and thank you.

Title: Too much baby mama drama
Author: Lex
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Description: He has baby mama drama and a lot of it! Will you be able to deal with it or will you find comfort in the arms of someone else?

Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5047789710868480
Plz send the review to my dm.

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#5

hi ! Here’s mine. :wink:

Story Title: XENA PIERCE
Author: sophiesophilatte
Story Genre: ACTION
Style: Limelight
Story Description:
An HEIRESS, a DAUGHTER, a GIRL who seeks answers–guide XENA KATSUMI PIERCE as she fights in order to save her mother. Will she make it through? Her SURVIVAL depends on YOU. (CM)

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Link:

Pm pls.

Thank you so much :wink::bowing_woman:t2:

#6

Title: Blades of Desire
Author: Giselle C.
Genre: Drama
Style: LL
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Description:
Your life was perfect: hot BF, rich, and gorgeous. Will Graham help you win back the life that you had lost, or will you get caught up in Romans’ heat? (Choices matter)

Here please!

#7

Feel free to check out mine :slight_smile:

My story: Thriller: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Story style: Secret Surprise :wink:
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288
Cover:
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Feedback: Via PM please

#8

_Title: Capture the Moment
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Comedy
Style: Limelight
Description: Takoda is a photographer who inspires to become freelance and expand his portfolio. Can he snapshot his way to success?
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Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5666941859397632
Extra notes: This will likely be a short story.
If you want feedback on here or PM:
PM

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#9

Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Genre: drama
Style: Limelight
Description: After years of searching, she had finally found them. Can she get close to them?
Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose - who will she become?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5874052041146368
Feedback? PM
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#10

Story Title: Reckless
Story Author: MoonFlareStories
Genre: Drama, Romance
Episodes published: 4 (incomplete)
Description: You’re off on your own in the city. But being young (and hired by a rich businessman to keep his affairs separate) it doesn’t take long for you to sweep up a giant mess cc & choices matter
Do you want review sent here or in DM here
Style Limelight
Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5735134442422272
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#11

Hi, I would love if you could please give my story a read, if you have the time.

Title : Way Back
Author: Rex
Genre: Romance, Mystery, Thriller, Drama
Style: Limelight
Description: Something terrible happened to MC’s BFF and she feels at blame for it, so she distances herself from all things and people who remind her of that night and distracts/busies herself with her career (acting and singing). The only problem with that is, you can only run from your problems for so long. What happens when her past starts to catch up with her? Read to find out!
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Story Link: HERE
Extra notes : It responsibly deals with mental health, the death of a loved one, faith, and substance abuse ( meaning I did research and consulted people ).
If you want feedback on here or PM: A review on here is fine

Thank you in advance!

#12

_Title: Search for love
Author: S.writes
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Description:Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation.Can you find the love you’re looking for trying to escape?

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(Created by @relle.edits)
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5548786201264128
Extra notes: English isn’t my first language⚠️
If you want feedback on here or PM: PM me please :warning:
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#13

Can you review my story? I just got approved for The Epys Awards and I want to make sure my story is the best it can be! :heart_eyes::joy:

Story : Mischief Night:vampire:t3::heart_eyes::jack_o_lantern::ghost::orange_heart::tada:

Chapters: 7 Ongoing

Genre: Fantasy/Horror/Comedy

Character Style: Limelight

Plot:

This Story follows Brooklyn, a girl who hates Halloween but soon finds herself in a world with Real Monsters!:vampire:t2::woman_zombie::ghost:
http://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/6713243931115520

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