Honest reviews for new story

opinion

#1

Hey! I published my story not too long ago and I didn’t get any reads on it so I was wondering if you could read it and write me what you liked and what I can do to improve it :two_hearts:

  • also feel free to put your story here and I’ll read it too :heart:

Title: The Lame Treasure Hunt
Author: Meital D
Genre: Comedy
Description: You went on a treasure hunt because why not? now the journey begins! meet a fairy, compete with a robot, drug a boxer, meet a girl called banana!? and so much more! (cc)
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link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5836848585113600


#2

Hi!! Please read @S.Dsana and I’s newly published story! :blush:

Story title: Quiet Confidence
Author’s Name: Winter05 with S.Dsana
Genre: Drama
Story style: INK
Description of the story: People don’t talk to you, not because of anything because of your status what will happen when a billionaire sets his eyes on you to take you to the top?
Number of episodes: 3 [ONGOING]
Instagrams: @winter05.episode with @princesssana_sa
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4942036682014720
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Feel free to leave fanmail or PM me feedback! We hope you enjoy it!! :heart:

~ Winter :snowflake:


#3

If you want a review of your story, check out my thread here: Winter's Reviews for Reads [OPEN] :slight_smile:


#4

Thanks :two_hearts:


#5

No problem. :wink:


#6

Hey, @Meital_Author !

I’d love to read your story and give it my honest feedback. I hope you’d want to check out my story, too. Here are my story details:

Title: Silhouettes
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Ink
Blurb: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6116658762874880
My Instagram: @aprilish.episode

Thank you so much, and have a great day! :blush::two_hearts:


#7

I just finished reading yours and it’s really good! :heart:

In my opinion the scene when The main character finds out that she won is a little short and doesn’t make the reader get excited about it and makes it seem a little simple but I liked everything else!

Here’s proof btw


#8

It sounds good I’ll read it now :two_hearts:


#9

Thank you!! I will read your story when I get home. :heart:


#10

I just finished reading the first episode and It’s really good, I loved the zooms and the a scene with the blond princess that’s actually kind of a bad girl :two_hearts:


#11

Thank you so much! :purple_heart:


#12

TITLE: Too Much Drama, Trust No One!
DESCRIPTION: Mulasia slept with someone she should’ve had more information on. Will she keep his baby or abort it? Is her mom lying?
STORY TYPE : Episode Original
STORY STYLE: Episode Ink
EPISODE: 3 (ongoing episode)

Hope you like it

it’s my first time


#13

Story title: Fantastical: Falling From Grace
Author’s Name: Episode Royalty
Genre: Fantasy
Story style: LL
Description of the story: After his father was killed, his family exiled, and his life forever changed… will Tristan be able to wield his sword and restore his grace?
Number of episodes: 3 [ONGOING]
Instagrams: @episode._crown and @blue1209.episode and @penroyalty


#14

Hi!! Please read mine newly published story! :blush:

Story title: Fanatstical: Virtues of Destiny
Author’s Name: S.Dsana
Genre:- Fantasy
Story style: INK
Description of the story: - "Evil is rising, truth is surpassing, but what will happen when they find out who they really are? Is this going to lead to love, hate, revenge or magical encounter.
Choices Matter
Number of episodes: 3 [ONGOING]
Instagram: @princesssana_sa
Link:



Feel free to leave fanmail…:blush::blush:


#15

Hi there! I’d love to get a review from you!!

Title: Fantastical: Regnum Fortes
About: You’re a set of twins which were suddenly zapped into a realm you never even knew about. What now?
Episodes: 3 (on-going)
What to expect:

  • This story uses a point system! (Choices actually matter.)
  • This story has a wide variety of Love Interests! Even options for the LGBT community!
  • Some pretty rad effects! (50+ overlays and backgrounds were used!)
  • Fighting scenes!
  • Plot twists you never saw coming!
  • Diverse characters!
  • Text effects!
  • + Many more features!


#16

Hi!
Thanks for starting this thread! I’ll give your story a read and I will DM you once I’m finished. :slight_smile:

And if you want to check it out here is my story:

Title: The Essentia Chronicles
Author: Tldax913
Style: Ink
Genre: fantasy
Description: Kadence is a powerful essence with a troubled past. Will she be able to embrace her power in time to save her realm or will darkness consume her?
Link: HTTP://episodeinteractive.com/s/6652498123816960
Thank you :slightly_smiling_face:
-TD

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#17

Hey! I`d love to do 4r4!


Story : Let the demon inside
Gender: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood because of you brother. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural freinds?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4876381520789504


#18

Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re an average highschool girl. What’ll happen to your life when you get kidnapped by a pack of Hybrids that claim that you are their sacred Queen? CC, ChoicesMatter, 5Endings
Chapters: technically 3 bc ch 2 is customization
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5387476824358912
Instagram: emberpackepisode :smile::heartbeat:


#19

Hey! Want to do a r4R??

Here’s my story!
Title: Revival
Author: Grace S
Genre: Action
Episodes: 10
Style: Ink
Instagram: episode__grace
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4762507897602048
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#20

I’ll read it now