@aprilish your request is accepted.
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Hi, @BadassSaasha! (My name is Alex but many call me Sasha as well 
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Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!
If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, the story will keep you hooked 
My story details:
Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af
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@Missepisodewriter your review is done.
Your story was really really nice. It contained enough amount of humour and romance. You focused not only on MC but also on the supportive charactersâs lives. The only flaw , as you said , was that there were negligible amount of choices but I understand that you wanted the first 5 chapters to be pilot and starting chapters canât contain so many choices but i hope you will add more choices in the next episodes.
That being said I like your story very much and oh , I will be waiting for the next episode to release.
~ Your newest fan 
Hope you found my review useful.
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Hey guys I just made a new thread for edits , splashes , covers and what not. Check it out.
Thank you very much!
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Pleasure. But I wonât be able to do it till tomorrow. Hope you understand.
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Hey there !
I would love a review.
Hereâs the link :
Title : STOCKHOLM SYNDROM : THE BROKEN ONE
Author : DR JOJE
link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5647443467567104
XOXO
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Absolutely no problem at all, I understand you must be loaded! Take your time and I hope you will enjoy the story!
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Everyone who I promised to give a review today , I am sorry but I canât as something came up. I really wanted to but I just have so much work that I couldnât. Hope you guys understand.
@daniepisodewriter your review is ready (this review is for first two chapters only. I will give you another review later for more chapters when I have finished with the other reviews.)
So here is what I observed that you should add Character customisation. I donât give that advice to anyone but I feel like your story can have CC which will make it more interesting but you donât have to if you have something on your mind.
Besides that I like your story. And from the first two chapters I can say you are a good writer as I donât read Vampire stories usually but yours was hard to not read.
I will get back to you with a review of rest of the chapters. Hope you found it useful.
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Yeah and maybe add a little more choices too ?
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No problem.It doesnât matter how many choices you added. They are never enough.
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Hey! I am new to Episode and just published the first 3 chapters of my first story⊠it is called Ledyanyye Volki (Ice Wolves) and can be found here!:
Nobody has read it yet⊠so I am just looking for someone to look at it and give me honest feedback so I can revise it, and hopefully make the next chapters even better!
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Hey there! I would really appreciate an honest review for my story 
Story Title : Just a little Mix-Up
Author: gin_ny
Genre : Comedy, Romance, Roommate
Episodes: 11 (complete)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5926612431798272
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Thank-you so much. You will be happy to know I am working on ep 6 right now! 
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I sure am waiting.