From what I have gathered from the first few chapters I would like to say that you are very good at coding and direction stuff. That being said you have an amazing storyline and apparently a lot of plot twists which is very good. Now I think you can add a little more detail to everything. These episodes are fine but make sure that in the coming episodes you make things a bit more detailed. ( Please note that it is just my opinion. I might be wrong. )
At last I believe you can add more choices to make it even more interesting than it already is.
PLEASE NOTE THAT I AM CURRENTLY GIVING REVIEWS ONLY ON YHE BASIS OF FIRST TWO CHAPTERS. IF ANYONE OF YOU WANTS A REVIEW OF MORE THAN TWO CHAPTERS LET ME KNOW.
So I read the first two chapters of your story and I think I have one and only one tip for you. You have shown right from the start that the main characters love each other. If you want to hook readers with your story you must make sure they get what they want.
The readers do not want to know whatās happening now. They want to see their relationship flourish in front of them first. Until you donāt show them that they wouldnāt card to read your story.
If you want I can give you ideas you can PM me or DM me on Instagram for more. My instagram account is @saasha_episode.
Again I am really sorry guys for being late. Please let me know if anyone of you wants the review faster than I have predicted and I will see what I can do.
Hi, I would like a review if itās possible
TITLE : The sound of love
AUTHOR : Anna
STYLE : Ink
GENRE : Romance
DESCRIPTION : A fleeting exchange of looks will change your life forever. Will a popstar win your heart? Customize characters.
EPISODE : 5 (Ongoing)
LINK : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4562507853332480
INSTAGRAM : @thesoundoflove_ep
Okay so first of all I am not really into that kind of stories still I read yours. And I must say that it was really nice. The directing was good and grammar was also fine but unfortunately that is all I can tell as I am not really into it.
Yeah they are good and everything. I didnāt want to say that your story was good when honestly I had no idea since I havenāt read anything like that before.
@MoniM , @random.girlheer and @Besea your requests are accepted. But it will take time and honestly I donāt know how much time it will take. Itās just when I created this thread I wanted to help people and entertain myself along the way but I never thought so many of you would actually care enough to even notice which is why it takes me so much time to do the reviews and I am doing as fast as I can. I just need some time to complete those reviews. I know you guys will understand.
Donāt worry about how long itāll take - you should also enjoy doing it
I definitely donāt mind if it takes you a week or longer, I just want people to give my story a chance and Iām so happy you do
Aww thanks I donāt want to decline a single request I get. I also want stories that have potential to get a chance. Some of them are actually really nice and still go unnoticed.
