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I’m starting a review thread on art so please feel free to drop it down for a review! I am honest and pay very close attention. I won’t sugar coat anything but I’ll say it in the nicest way possible (if that makes sense) This is my opinion and outlook on things. Be sure to know that your artwork is BEAUTIFUL!! What I point out in this means this is what you could improve on. It does not, I repeat DOES NOT mean your art is bad and that there is anything wrong with it. Everyone does art in their own way, including me. These suggestions are supposed to be helpful, not hurtful. Please remember that.
Now that we have that out of the way, let’s get this show on the road!
I am trying to make edits. I just started last week, so I’m not very good but I would love for you to tell me what areas I should focus on improving! I already know the eyes lol, I am not good with eyes. Here is 2 of mine:
@Kmayber. There was a multiple mix of errors, but also some great pros considering it’s your just starting out to make art! I numbered each one so you know what I’m talking about. Hopefully you can see it. I know my handwriting is trash. Sorry.
The outline of the eyes are a little too big. I would suggest making the eyeliner a little bit bigger. Also, add more shinings to the eye and maybe put them on the pupil instead of beside it.
Same with the lips. I would suggest putting the shade of the shine a light red, not white.
You can barely see the shading of the neck, try putting the color a little bit darker so we can tell it’s shading.
The little line is going slightly out the lining of the shirt. I would suggest go back and erase any extra lines.
The breast line marking cleavage is a little on the high side, try connecting it to the rest of the shirt.
I love the background you decided to put this as! It goes greatly with the colors of the rest on the outfit.
I think what you are doing in #7 is drawing a line and then drawing over it. Try to aboid doing this. Most of the time it makes two separate lines together. I would suggest erasing the first mistake line and then redrawing it.
Since the girl is facing right and not forward, try removing that extra nostril so it’s just the one.
He eyeshadow is a little hard. I would suggest using Gaussian Blur to make it look more realistic.
I love how you added the pineapple necklace! It goes with the rest of the outfit and brings style.
The cleavage lines are separated and there are two. I would suggest putting one line showing cleavage and connecting it to the top.
I think this part of the shirt should be cover in pineapples as well! That’s just me though. If you did, be sure to make it in a different position pattern because the breasts make it more curves then the stomach.
I don’t know if that’s anonymous line or if that’s the bellybutton. If it’s a random line, I would suggest removing it but if it’s a belly button, I would suggest moving lower.
That tattoo looks a little pixilated. You would want to make sure that it looks as clear as possible to resemble an actual tattoo.
The sparkles were a very nice touch! I would make a tiny suggestion to put some on the other side to have symmetry.