Honest reviews wanted for my stroy


#1

Hi everyone!
I have a story called toxic love, and I would like to know how I can improve my story.
If someone would like to take the time to read it and give his honest, with emphasis on honest lol, I’d really appreciate it :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
I’m really curious about the things I could improve!
Let me know xx
Here’s the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6063831722885120


#2

I will definitely read it! I will let you know what I think when I’m done.


#3

I would also like to read it and give you feedback. :blush:


#4

Tysm!! :heart:


#5

Really appreciate it :kissing_heart:


#6

Of course!


#7

I read your story and I honestly loved it! I don’t have anything that I think should be fixed as of right now! I will let you know if I think of something, but this story is really great!


#8