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Hi, I would like to get a review on my story :blush:

Tittle : Life Without Jennifer
Author: Mia
Number of episodes to want reviewed : 3
Additional information : An accident has Jennifer torn from the world. Her loved ones are now left to learn how to live without her.
Where would you like your review to be posted? You can PM it to me.

Thank you for doing this!

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ok on it

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Ooo yes! May you review mine?

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ofcouse story

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I’d love a review!
Here’s my story
Name: Girl of Deception
Author: IDONTKNOW
Genre: Adventure

Thank you in advance :heart:

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ONNN ITT lol

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Thank you :heart:

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np

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Oh I’m trying to brush up the 2nd chapter because of a mistake and chapter 3 isn’t complete , but I’ll still send the details

Story: Video Game Heroes
Chapters: 3 so far
Author: Chinwe
Description: Pixels, bytes and a psychotic villain: it’s just your average day in the digital world! Sucked into a virtual realm, you and your friends have to stay sharp to survive!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5257557735505920

Thanks so much!

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ok great

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Tittle : The Pregnancy Curse
Author: Dr.Smile
Number of episodes to want reviewed : 3
Where would you like your review to be posted? On this thread

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Hey there! Thank you for making this thread and helping all underrated authors out! :slight_smile:

I only have done one episode of this (currently unpublished) story and am looking for ways to improve :smiley:

Title: Stranded


Author: Freya v.
Description: N/A
No. Of episodes: 1

I would like the feedback to be PM’ed please :grin:

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On itt

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On ittt

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Thank you so much! I just love it when people make threads like these - It helps everyone out :heart::slightly_smiling_face:

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Title : Gang Affiliated
Author: Annie K.
Number of episodes to want reviewed : (1-3) 3
Where would you like your review to be posted? (On this thread or pm it to you): On this thread

Thank you so much! :slight_smile:

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np

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on it

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Grading rubric :heart_decoration::heart_decoration:
Punctuation - ( marked from a scale of 1-10)
10
Spelling - (marked from 1-10)
10
Directing and Coding - ( marked from 1-5 )
5
Episode length ( marked from 1’short’ 2’medium’ 3’Long ’
Medium
Cover - ( marked from 1-3)
3
Rating ( how much would I rate your story ) marked from 1-5
5
Great story!!!

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Thank you so much! :blush:

Is there any way I can improve it? Or is it perfect as it is?