Honest Story Review!

Hello there ! I have been on this app for a bit more than a year and so, I really want to help out starting writers with their stories. What tweaks they should make to better their stories and have more reads. I do have one condition though (I can hear the sighs hihi)
I only read limelight (sorry) So feel free to DM me @raysepisode
I would greatly appreciate if you check my story Keep it a Secret! (love triangle,high school,comedy) :smiling_face_with_three_hearts::blush: (I need your reviews as well )
PS : If youā€™re also stuck with a chapter I can maybe help brainstoarm ideas with you ^^

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Yes, letā€™s do it

Deadly Secrets

A vampire loves her. Her best friendā€™s a Werewolf. Her parents? Magically royal. Only one thing. Delilah doesnā€™t even know. Her world, is not as she knows. Will she accept fate?

Lost Summer Love

Crazy love. Wacky friends. Unnecessary drama. How will Evan and Sierra make it through this crazy thing called, life

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I will read the first one right away ^^

Canā€™t wait to hear your thoughts. Fingers crossed :crossed_fingers:t4: itā€™s ok haha

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Iā€™d appreciate it if you can review mine!
Title: The stars have colors
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance
By: Shahar
Description: Your life was made of two colors: black and white. Until one day you meet someone that shows you the world in a colorful way [LL\CC]
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5452449138933760

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I Dmed you on insta ^^

Check your insta ^^

Greetings. Iā€™d love to hear any thoughts you might have about my story if youā€™re interested.

Title: Eternal Oblivion
Author: Silver Lady
Genre: Fantasy primarily with some action, drama, romance, and just a hint of historical fiction thrown in from time to time (more so in later chapters yet to be written).
Style: Limelight
Number of Episodes: Seven currently, more on the way.
CC: Kinda. You canā€™t customize the main three characters (for story reasons), but there is a character for you to customize starting with chapter five. You wonā€™t see much of her to start, but she becomes more important later in the plot.
Description: Something ancient plots unseen in the darkness, and Amara must quickly uncover the mystery surrounding it. Otherwise, all will be lost.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6355100663873536
Cover:
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Hi! Hereā€™s mine :hugs:

Tittle: Agent 66: Born to Kill (CC)
Author: xoRosƩxo
Style: Limelight
Genre: Action
Chapters: 3
Description: Agent 66 is an infamous assassin. But when a mission gone wrong, 66 kidnaps Sasha - his possible witness, and sets to discovers the truth before itā€™s too late.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4722588854321152
Instagram: xoroses.episode
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I will read it as soon as I can ^^
Seems very exciting!
in the meantime please feel free to read my story
Keep it a Secret!


Iā€™d love for you to review mine as well hihi

Canā€™t say no to action :wink:
Iā€™ll read it as soon as possible so stay tuned !


Here is the link to my story Keep it A secret !

Will do. Iā€™ll send you a SS and review as soon as I finish.

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New Story / New Author

Story: Unusual Girl


Chapters: 4/20
Author: Cali
Description: Zoe, an artistic girl, who has returned from a 2 months hiatus. She finds that her friends have changed and secrets have be revealed. How will Zoe navigate high school now?
Style: LL

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Name : Right Beside you
Plot : After a traumatizing event, Nadineā€™s health turned upside down. Can she recuperate after visiting an Eating Recovery Center? Itā€™s up to you. [CC/LL/POINTSYSTEM/CHOICE MATTER]
Episodes : 7
Status : On going
Gerne : Drama & Romance
Style : Limelight
CC : Available
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5251847875788800
My IG : nellyy.epi

You can watch my story trailer here .

Story Cover [Made by me] :

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Thank you so much for this thread.
I hope that you will read and like my story :slight_smile:

Here is the description of my story :

Title : NEVERLAND
Author : Maggy

Genre : Romance/Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 9 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : Jiselle loves her grandmotherā€™s intriguing fantasy story about a world called ā€˜Neverlandā€™ that she wishes to discover. Will her wish comes true? Find out!

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4898085022859264

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how do i contact u

Iā€™d like a review!

Title: Assassins
Author: inkkee
Genre: Action & Romance
Chapters: 3 more coming
Description: Youā€™re finally graduating as a full fledged assassins. And on top of that youā€™ll get personal training from a special someoneā€¦ How will your new career take off?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4700589554991104

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Hi, I would appreciate it if you review my story

Title: The Society (of Haverford)
Author: Scarlett
Genre: Comedy
Desc: What happen when Romeo meets Juliette in 21st century? And actually at war inside Haverfordā€™s elite society.
CC ā ā€” Choices Matter ā ā€” Mental Health

link:

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http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5205078083174400

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