I’ve been working on my 1st story “Lost Love” (It’s a mafia story)
I want some honest feedback for improving my writing!! If anyone could give me feedback and review my story that would be amazing!
And my story is unpublished!
So If anyone would help me I would truly appreciate it! (I will PM you)
Story Description: After one Night Rylee’s life turned upside down!! But what happens when he comes back unexpectedly.Will she forgive him and and let him in Or will she hold the grudge Forever?