Honest story Review

Hello everyone!
I’ve been working on my 1st story “Lost Love” (It’s a mafia story)
I want some honest feedback for improving my writing!! If anyone could give me feedback and review my story that would be amazing! :heart:
And my story is unpublished!
So If anyone would help me I would truly appreciate it! (I will PM you)

Story Description: After one Night Rylee’s life turned upside down!! But what happens when he comes back unexpectedly.Will she forgive him and and let him in Or will she hold the grudge Forever?

Hey! I’m willing to review your story! My profile is hidden so let me know if you want me to review it :slightly_smiling_face:

Do you have Ig?

Yes I do. It’s is_episode

Sorry if I’m Disturbing you!
But is the account private with annimation of eating Pizza?

Yes it is lol

K I’m gonna DM

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