Honest story reviews, by Maya.epi

title: Pregnant by the bad pregnant robot(?)

description: Love , laughter and drama collide in this wacky adventure with little life lessons along the way. Will the ships survive? Or will you fail to take the crazy? (the plot is memes)

I think I spend so much coding, that I don’t realize how short the chapter is :slight_smile:
Also English is not my first language, sorry for the typos :sweat_smile:
Thank you so much for reading my story and giving me actual honest review, I really appreciate it :revolving_hearts:

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Hello @Maya.epi! I would love to have some honest feedback from you too! <3

Story: Call of Duty
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5281177222316032
Cover: E9DE975D-68D9-413C-BEC1-00BF4090720C
Episodes: 3 so far
Style: Limelight
Genre: Drama
Summary: Isabella has been assigned as an undercover to arrest a crime lord with a materialistic, rich and arrogant bad boy as her partner. Will they succeed? [cc]

Thank you so much for the review :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I’m happy you enjoyed it!

Changing the beginning’s point of view would be turning the plot upside down basically :rofl: you’ll understand more when you read the next episodes!

Do you mean Chase and Ivanna’s scene? Can you point out the ones that sound like a Jane Austen novel? This is the first time I heard someone commenting on this sksksks
I may not be a native English speaker, but I think you’d be surprised by how articulate some people can speak.

It’s an abuse of power Because Chase’s company is a small one compared to Liselle’s the gigantic enterprise. It would be too much of a spoiler if I explain, so you can read on to find out ^^

I just recently changed my ig username haha. Will change the splash in my next update💕

Description: Step into the shoes of a teenage boy and try to find your own voice in lyrical opera, friendship, love and family…
Author: Grottino
Cover:


can you review 3 chapters?

Would love a review, you can post it here :slight_smile:
Title: Looking for Skylar
Author: AlaLala
Genre: Mystery
Episodes: 11 (more coming soon)
Summary: You wake up covered in blood and you can’t remember who you are nor what happened to you. Will you ever remember? (character customization)
Style: Limelight
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4602949994872832

Hi. I think reviews are really useful so I’d appreciate one.
My story is “The unEXpected show” and I’d like the review of three chapters, sent on PM.
Thank you a lot :kissing_heart:

Ohh… :grinning: when did we do read for read ? :thinking:

hi! :sparkles:
I would like a review, and don’t worry about being “harsh”, I want to improve my story :smile: (PM it to me)
Can you review three chapters? (because I feel like the first three chapters are all pilot episodes) :thinking:
60 MINUTES AHEAD by Anna
Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Style: LL
You volunteer to be the first human to test time travel, only going an hour forward with time. But when you leave travel pod, all other humans are gone. (CC)
link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5951939237445632
Cover:


https://www.episodeinteractive.com/write/story/June_NzFN
*Title: June
Style: Limelight/Classic
Genre: Comedy/romance
Chapters: 11
Description: A lonely graphic designer draws a beautiful woman, then wakes up one morning to find her in his kitchen room.
Instagram: @Aliceproductions

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Hi :slightly_smiling_face: Thank you so much for this thread!

Title - The Only Exception

Author - Amelia

Instagram - @ameliamason.episode

Genre - Romance/Drama

Style - Limelight

Number of Episodes - 7 (to be continued)

Description - Raised by parents in a loveless marriage, Alice grew up believing that she could never stay in love. Can her walls ever be broken? Or will her cynical attitude chase everyone away?

Chapters for you to read: 3 :slight_smile:

Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6579476002308096

Moved to Share Feedback since this is for reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. :wink:

how did you do both styles?

Try here

I want to read your story, but I can’t seem to find it :frowning:

My story is called ‘Corrupted Minds’ :slight_smile:

I’d love for you to review my story! Could you review the first three chapters please :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Title - beautiful broken lies
Description - elena’s life seems perfect. Partying, boys, friends, you name it. That is until a dark tragedy changes her life forever. What is the truth? Will it break her?
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6662026650320896
Author - Hannah & Carly

https://www.episodeinteractive.com/write/story/June_NzFN

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