Honest story reviews needed

Hey everyone!
My friend and I have recently published our new story!
We would love some honest feedback of it.
You may contact me on here, or on our joint Instagram - @liv.aimee.episose
Thank you so much and I hope to hear from you!

Story - Beneath The Surface
Authors - Liv B and Aimee
Genre - Action
Chapters out - 2
Description - Being a FBI agent was always your passion, but there is a dark side to every dream. Secrets appear and it’s up to you to find the truth. Can you discover it and finally move on?

I’ll dm you guys my feedback after I’m done reading :black_heart:

If you want feedback request here on this thread Honest reviews for stories

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