Alright here is my opinion on your story, The directing was good but some scenes were really messy, The spellings was excellent but there was alot of sentences that had wrong place of words, And I’m only gonna be focusing on episode 1, 2 and 3 because that is where the readers get their interest of the story, It felt like the story depended on the directing and not the plot because there was very little plot, The length was also 5-8 minutes which is kinda short for a story like that, But overall I’ll give it a 5/10! You can add a bit of dialogue and storyline because it lacked them. Have a nice day
Alright Here is my opinion! The storyline was great, I liked the plot it was very intriguing, The directing was on point and I loved the everything about the aesthetic! The grammar was also really well written and Its a great story!! I hope you continue to write more of this story!
Okay here is my opinion on your story! Its one of the best stories I have seen so far in this topic! The directing is very good and the storyline is also flowing really well which is good for a story! Directing and storylines are the two main things for a story and the balance between those two is very equal! I also liked the comedic twist you put into the story, which makes the story more fun! Overall I loved the story and I would defo read it!
Thanks for this
- Forum Name: Liz & Mar
- IG handle: @ / liz_mar.episode
- Story Name: R&R: In Love with Her Soul
One LI (choose gender)
You can also find my story in the R&R shelf on the app
They say that love conquers all. But is love enough for Demon, Asmodeus, to choose HER over himself? Is he willing to give up his soul to save hers?
Male MC,M/F LI,Point System, CC
Wow, fast review! Thank you so much. I appreciate it. I can tell you when it’s published. :))
Here is my opinion on your story, It has got a lot of potential and I love the way the mc is a male! The directing and the storyline didn’t clashed each other making the story balanced, The grammar was also really good! I wasn’t disappointed by anything so far so its a really good story! Loved it :))
Thank you! Could you be a little more specific like what episode or scenes so I can. Know where to change. Also there were only 3 chapters lol.
Yep but I’m telling you that the first three episodes are the main focus on the story!
and I don’t have passes anymore so I’ll let you know after I gained them!
hey thankyou so much for doing this!! I would like reviews
Here is my stories
Hope u will like it,
Story title- The Love Game
Description- What will happen when Cloe accidently meet her soulmate through her gamer heart? Without seeing each other will they be able to love? CC, choices matter, art scenes
Story title- Memory lost
Description- Lyle lost her memory while saving another person and her bravery turns the spotlight onto her…Little does she know, there’s someone watching her from the shadow.
Hi! I’d love an honest review from you My story is called Soul Searching
Looking forward to your thoughts
Hey, If you’re not too busy I would like a review. My story is only half an episode so far but I would like to get some thoughts to see if I should continue. Really excited to see what you think, bare in mind though that it is still being sorted out.
Thank you so much for the review!
Thank you for doing this
Author: Ava. S
Title: Love, Hate
Story Genre: Comedy And Romance
Chapters: 9 (more chapters coming soon)
Story Style: Limelight
Gem Choice: Start from chapter 5
Liam Johnson is a famous boy band leader. Because of an “accident.” , he switches bodies with a GIRL?!?!?! Is this an arrangement of fate? Will they fall in love with each other?