Honest story reviews :)

Hello. You can post my review here on the thread is alright :slight_smile: Could you review all of them though? I would mostly be done with the final chapter 7 soon. So would 7 chapters be alright for you to review? (The whole story :sweat_smile:)

Name of story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author name: Jannah Jackson
Story Description:
New Description:
Tales of the Old Asians warned that WW2 scars still plagued the exotic-cursed tribe in the mythical land at East South East Asia. The land of Sun, light & black magic, lies and dark secrets. Can you survive, solve the havoc, cleanse and heal, save and free everyone? Or die in vain?

Old Description:
Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? FullCC/MiniGames/Tappables
How many episodes does it has: 6/7 published
Genre: Realistic-Fantasy/Mystery/ Adventure/Thriller/Horror
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

Cover (With symbolic meanings of the cover inside the story)

Additional Info:

  1. Chapters are generally slightly longer than most episode stories…given because of the nature of the plot.

I’ll get to it soon for you. Would you like me to get all three stories into one reply or would you prefer if I did them one at a time?

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I’ll get to it soon, the longer chapters won’t be a problem, but you may have to wait a while as I’m very busy at the moment

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Sure of course

I don’t mind either way, just do it the way it is more comfortable for you :blush: thank you so much for accepting all of my stories!

I’d like you to review my story c:
Name: House of Assassins
Style: Ink
Genre: Comedy/Romance
Chapters to review: 3 (if possible)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6249464584273920

This is to all stories I haven’t received yet, its going to take a while but I will get to them :slightly_smiling_face:
Have a nice day

I would like to you to review my first chapter :slight_smile:
Focus on plot/directing and correct me if there are any tragic grammar mistakes :sweat_smile:
Right Beside you
Plot : After a traumatizing event, Nadine’s health turned upside down. Her aunt, who wants the best for her, decides to send her into an Eating Recovery Center. [SEMI CC/LL/POINTS]
Episodes : 1
Status : On going
Gerne : Drama & Romance
Style : Limelight
CC : Available, but limited
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5251847875788800
My IG : nellyy.epi

Story Cover [Made by me] :

Hi! Thanks for this thread :smiley: I would love it if you could review the first 3 chapters of my story!

STYLE: Limelight
SUMMARY: Rewind, Relive, and Revive. A story about the encounters of love, friendship, betrayal, and… TIME MANIPULATION! Unravel the string of truths embedded in time w/ the top-dog team.
CHAPTERS: 3 Chapters (ongoing)
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4666281065250816
INSTAGRAM: @piki.episode

Hi, thank you for making this thread!
I’d love if you’d review my story! Here are the details:

Title: Sidereal
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Limelight
Blurb: An unlikely turn of events brings Dahlia from outer space to outside Felix’s window. Join them on their star-crossed journey as they cherish the wonders of being worlds apart.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5063859204587520

The covers~


Thank you so much! :heartbeat:

Hi there!
Tysm for this :sparkling_heart:

Information about my story
Story title: Forbidden Love
Name author (so me): Lili Star
Genre: Romance and a little bit of comedy
Story style: INK
Story caption: Princess Amanda never thought that she would have feelings for a girl, which is forbidden. Until she met Vanessa, the gorgeous sister of prince Roberto who she has to marry.
Episodes: 6, but more are coming soon!
Important information: This is my first story, so it is not the best, but you can still enjoy it. There are also not many choices. There is no CC and sounds/music are since chapter 4.
Here is the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4671279079948288

My Instagram: @lili_on_episode
If you follow me, I will follow back :two_hearts:

Here is the (small) cover:

Hi, thanks so much for this thread!
Author(s): Bbygirlbrooks & kawaii_patience
Title of story: The Wrong Kind of Love
How many chapters your story has: 3
Style of story: INK
Customization included?: Yes!! :kissing_closed_eyes:
Description: Being an all-powerful princess can be good and bad, especially when you die and get sent to hell! What kind of affections and dangers await you in this place of misery?
Genre: Fantasy/Romance

Hi! can you review my story? any constructive criticism is welcome

Title: The Society (of Haverford)
Author: Scarlett:
Desc: Romeo of the House of Blue Eagle meets Juliette of the House Red Sparrow. One from fraternity, one from sorority & both despise one another.
CC ⁠— Choices Matter ⁠— LIMELIGHT
Chpater to review: ALL



thank you so so much

Hey guys. I’m really sorry for ghosting you all, but I won’t be finishing your reviews unfortunately. I just don’t have the time anymore, and I’ve gotten super involved in other things. I’m sure all your stories had great ideas, but I’m sorry but I recommend you look elsewhere from now.
@Sydney_H Could you close this for me?

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Closed by OP request. :smiley: