Hello! My name is allyy20, and I love helping people out in various ways.
If you want an honest story review, I’d love to read your stories. I will be giving you constructive critism and my full opinion on the story itself, and will tell you why you have less reads etc.
Published(yes or no):
Instagram(optional if you want the review posted here and/or on instagram)
Any Specific Suggestions You Need Help On:
I will be grading your story on an overall 40 points
-How long the chapter is
-Warnings, Sounds, etc
5 points on animating:
-How many there are
-Effective to the story
Music and Sounds
-Way of saying stuff
Zooms and Spot Directing:
-How much you use them
-How original it is
-If it is too rushed into the story
5 - No need in suggestions; perfect
4 - Needs little improvement; good
3 - Needs some improvement; okay
2 - Needs lot of improvement; almost bad
1 - Needs a lot of help; bad
0 - Needs to work in the area, and will be given help even if unneeded; very bad
I hope I can help you!