I don’t think I should mention that it’s just one episode. If you read my feedback,(especially the directing,) you would have imminently understood that I was just focusing on one episode. Plus I can’t change my post again, since I can only edit it seven times, as I have already done!
- I’m sorry you was hurt by your score, and honestly I wasn’t really focusing on your grammar, I just noticed a few things. And sometimes I skipped over the mistakes by a mistake. Anyways, I’m not good at grammar, something you would/have seen when/if you read my story (especially the first episodes), and I gave you this low score because I thought that would fit. But when I look back at it, I would say that I was way too harsh! I think I could give you a 7.
I really don’t care if a story has millions reads. Even though a story has a million reads, it doesn’t have to be good. I’ve read too many of those…
And I know how your directing can improve by time, emh I’m truly ashamed of my first episode of my story. It’s horrible!! But it’s improved with time, and I’m going to revamp! That’s for sure. But the feedback I’m giving you, is more directed for the people who don’t wait 10 episodes for the story to become better. You need to give them something that catches their eyes so they continue reading. Because episode contains mostly of those people.
Anyways about only one episode, it’s still your episode. If first episode is not good enough, it will anyways pull your story down. I’m not posting this anywhere, and it’s just suggestions so your story can become better in my opinion. Your story was not bad, believe me, but there is things that drags it down like directing. But not everybody cares about it, and your story can still hit the top list even though your directing is simple.
I did not find your score low, but yeh someone gets higher and someone gets lower. All we can do is improve.