UPDATE: I am looking for feedback from anyone but especially from mystery readers. I have just moved this to the mystery section and I want to know if you think it belongs here/ if it appeals to you as a mystery reader. Does the cliché romance stuff, the bad boy stuff, the high school setting stuff put you off??
Hey, so I’m gonna be blunt: it’s a bad boy story. BUT before you leave this thread immediately, I like to think the story has some twists that you won’t see coming. Also, the MC really beats him at his own game.
And I’m not gonna lie: I’m looking to promote my first story but I’m trying to sweeten the offer by giving you the chance to absolutely rip my story to shreds. Plus, I need the feedback, I’m a new writer on Episode!
Do your worst. DM me here or on Instagram @cordeliam.episode
Author: Cordelia M
Description: Reformed bad girl falls for bad boy who reminds her of her past - cliché, right? But what if Violet isn’t truly reformed? What if she’s secretly still badder than Carter ever was?