Horrors of magic



I’m a first time writer and 12 people have read my story. I was hoping for some feedback on how to make my story better and hopefully get peoples attention so they’re interested in reading it.
Any advice?
I sure could use it :confused:


Send me your story’s link! I’ll read it and send you my thoughts in pm :hugs:



I just read the first episode, I’m going to read the next one and then I’ll message you :wink:



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